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 A great idea found at [knowing.net](http://www.knowing.net/index.php/2015/08/04/fizzbuzz-with-ios-9-gameplaykit-expert-system-in-c-with-xam-ios) and backported to swift.
 
-[Fizz buzz](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fizz_buzz) is a simple game. GameplayKit makes it very easy to describe the rules. There is a vast place for improvement when working with state untyped dictionary. It can definitely use some "swiftification". Here is the code:
+[Fizz buzz](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fizz_buzz) is a simple game and GameplayKit API making it equally simple to describe the rules. Untyped state dictionary can definitely use some "swiftification", but overall, code is quite simple. Here it is:
 
 {% gist zats/0ad1dac35e75587da7e0 fizzbuzz.swift %}
 
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 2
 fizz 
 4
-buzz 
-fizz 
-7
-8
-fizz 
-buzz 
-11
-fizz 
-13
-14
-fizz buzz 
-16
+buzz
 ...
 ```
 
-I'm looking forward to seeing frameworks emerging on top of GameplayKit! Foundation seems very promising.
+I'm looking forward to seeing gaming and not only frameworks emerging on top of GameplayKit! Foundation is very promising.