Grammar complexity and punctuation. #15
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@xBorderie Here's the first page of changes. |
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| Nearly 2000 themes are available through the PrestaShop Addons marketplace (http://addons.prestashop.com/en/). They were created either by members of the PrestaShop community or the PrestaTeam, and are sold at reasonable prices – some are even free. | ||
| There are over 2,000 themes available through the [**PrestaShop Addons Marketplace**] (http://addons.prestashop.com/en/). Created by members of the PrestaShop community or the PrestaTeam. And, sold at reasonable prices – some are even free. |
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While I'm okay with cutting long sentences in two (or more) and starting sentences with a conjunction, the whole 'follow a conjunction with a comma' thing here is a big no-no to me. I agree with the best answer here: "a comma is a “disjunction”, and defeats the purpose of the conjunction". Please update the PR accordingly.
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Thank you for proofreading this! Please update the PR according to my indication, and we should be good to go :) |
Made changes requested plus a few spelling errors and markdown syntax fixes, headings.
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I've never used RST before. Should I close the PR and use an online RST editor? |
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| Nearly 2000 themes are available through the PrestaShop Addons marketplace (http://addons.prestashop.com/en/). They were created either by members of the PrestaShop community or the PrestaTeam, and are sold at reasonable prices – some are even free. | ||
| There are over 2,000 themes available through the [**PrestaShop Addons Marketplace**] (http://addons.prestashop.com/en/). Created by members of the PrestaShop community or the PrestaTeam. And sold at reasonable prices – some are even free. |
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Wrong way to format a link: this a the Mardown way, in a RST document.
I think it's best to stop this PR, yeah. Thank you! |
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Closing this PR for now. Thanks! |
Hemingway app found several instances of difficult sentences, excessive use of passive voice and adverbs. I also found run-on sentences and links that should have been an anchor text link.