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stage0: minor wording fixes #3351

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@lucab lucab commented Nov 7, 2016

Minor rewording after CRI merge, cleaning up "appz" occurrences.

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lucab commented Nov 7, 2016

/cc @squeed

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ var (
cmdAppStart = &cobra.Command{
Use: "start UUID --app=NAME",
Short: "Start an app in a pod",
Long: `Start appz!`,
Long: "This allows starting an existing application inside a mutable pod",
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I don't like this "allows" verbiage - it does start an app in a mutable pod, does it not?

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I tend to agree with you here. I changed the other two subcommands to get rid of the "allows" occurrences there too.

@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@ var (
cmdAppStart = &cobra.Command{
Use: "start UUID --app=NAME",
Short: "Start an app in a pod",
Long: `Start appz!`,
Long: "This starts an existing application inside a mutable pod",
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how about "e.g. one that was previously added with rkt app add"

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ var (
cmdAppAdd = &cobra.Command{
Use: "add UUID IMAGEID ...",
Short: "Add an app to a pod",
Long: `This allows addin an app that's present on the store to a running pod`,
Long: "This adds a locally stored application to a running mutable pod",
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"locally stored application" is a bit confusing?

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It may be. Do you prefer original wording or do you have some better suggestion for this?

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"Adds an application available in the local image store to a running mutable pod"

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lucab commented Nov 8, 2016

Rephrased a little bit with @euank and @jonboulle wording.

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lgtm

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euank commented Nov 8, 2016

Semaphore failure is the known kvm stop flake.

@euank euank merged commit a1a3742 into rkt:master Nov 8, 2016
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