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(docs/dualstack): v1.17 updates #17457

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1.17 docs updates for dualstack based on issues/563

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Hi @lachie83
I'm a docs release team shadow. This is a kind reminder since we're approaching the deadline for PR to be ready to be reviewed by Nov 15, 2019. Kindly update this PR, thanks a lot..

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Add Downward API and /etc/hosts Pod IP validation
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remove addressed known issue via k/k pr 85246
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@irvifa - This PR is ready for review.

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irvifa commented Nov 16, 2019

Thank you so much mate!
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@lachie83 Just a reminder about the last Docs deadline - 22nd Nov, by which this PR needs to be merged!

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@lachie83 Can you please suggest a reviewer who can give a technical review done?

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just one nit.

content/en/docs/tasks/network/validate-dual-stack.md Outdated

The following command prints the value of the `MY_POD_IPS` environment variable from within a container. The value is a comma separated list that corresponds to the Pod's IPv4 and IPv6 addresses.
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kubectl exec -it pod01 -- env | grep MY_POD_IPS
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not:use set not env. AFIAK set is a builtin, env is not.

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thank you @khenidak for the review.

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(docs/dualstack): v1.17 updates (#17457)
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* Add placehold doc updates for dualstack in 1.17

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Add Downward API and /etc/hosts Pod IP validation

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* remove addressed known issue via k/k pr 85246

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Remove known issue and add flag as part of k/k 79993

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* remove follow up placeholders

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Update verbiage

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Make IP addressing consistent throughout the task

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Update to status.podIPs

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Update content/en/docs/tasks/network/validate-dual-stack.md

Use set instead of env

Co-Authored-By: Khaled Henidak (Kal) <khnidk@outlook.com>
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Official 1.17 Release Docs (#18011)
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* feat: graduate TaintNodesByCondition to GA (#17073)

* Promote StartupProbe to beta (enabled by default). (#17164)

* Watch bookmarks to GA (#17026)

* feat: graduate ScheduleDaemonSetPods to GA (#17350)

* Update Docker installation instructions (#17405)

* Use exact version numbers for installing Docker in Ubuntu (#17428)

* Move CSIMigration and CSIMigrationGCE to Beta in Kubernetes v1.17 (#17478)

* Promote NodeLease feature to GA (#17189)

* Update docs for csi topology ga (#17408)

* Update RunAsUsername to beta (#17460)

* doc:Update RunAsUsername to beta

* doc: update samples - kubernetes.io/os is no longer beta

* Updating based on review feedback

* Promote Node-specific volume limits to GA (#17432)

* Promote PodShareProcessNamespace to stable (#17192)

* Promote PodShareProcessNamespace to stable

* Add for_k8s_version to feature-state label

Co-Authored-By: Tim Bannister <tim@scalefactory.com>

* Readd version-check to shareProcessNamespace task

* Update service load balancer finalizer doc for GA (#17438)

* Update Topology Manager docs (#17451)

* Added information on how device plugins can take advantage
of Topology Manager
* Updated the Topology Manager documentation to include additionalinformation and update some out of date sections

* Fix broken Topology Manager link (#17746)

Part of What's Next Device Plugin section

* Update CRD defaulting docs for GA (#17450)

* Add documentation for VolumeSnapshot Beta (#17233)

* Updating EndpointSlice documentation for beta release in 1.17 (#17411)

* (docs/dualstack): v1.17 updates (#17457)

* Add placehold doc updates for dualstack in 1.17

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Add Downward API and /etc/hosts Pod IP validation

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* remove addressed known issue via k/k pr 85246

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Remove known issue and add flag as part of k/k 79993

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* remove follow up placeholders

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Update verbiage

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Make IP addressing consistent throughout the task

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Update to status.podIPs

Signed-off-by: Lachlan Evenson <lachlan.evenson@microsoft.com>

* Update content/en/docs/tasks/network/validate-dual-stack.md

Use set instead of env

Co-Authored-By: Khaled Henidak (Kal) <khnidk@outlook.com>

* add topology.kubernetes.io/zone, topology.kubernetes.io/region and node.kubernetes.io/instance-type labels to docs (#17498)

Signed-off-by: Andrew Sy Kim <kiman@vmware.com>

* Service topology alpha documentation (#17459)

* Update list of feature flags for in-tree plugins migrated to CSI (#17533)

Signed-off-by: Deep Debroy <ddebroy@docker.com>

* Update Node concept for TaintNodesByCondition going GA (#17577)

* feat: graduate ResourceQuotaScopeSelectors to GA in 1.17 (#17554)

* kubeadm: update the upgrade documentation for 1.17 (#17587)

* doc: Simplify Windows deployments with RuntimeClass (#16697)

* doc: Simplify Windows deployments with RuntimeClass

* Updating on review feedback

* doc: Adding windows-build label from enhancement 1301

* update doc for kubelet option --reserved-cpus (#17648)

* feat: update TaintNodesByCondition in feature gates table (#17377)

* Update docs for v1 resource quota configuration (#17547)

* AdmissionConfiguration v1 (#17548)

* Update WebhookAdmissionConfiguration examples (#17549)

* Update AWS EBS Migration Feature state (#16126)

* Add resource version section to api-concepts documentation (#16910)

* Add Resource Version semantics section to api concepts

* Clarify risks of going back in time, add details about compaction and watch cache sizes

* Apply suggestions from liggitt

Co-Authored-By: Jordan Liggitt <jordan@liggitt.net>

* remove pesudocode, apply feedback

* Fix typo

* Clarify equality rules

* Cleanup kubectl generators docs (#17609)

* Write ReplicationController without a space

* Drop mentioning unsupported cluster versions

* Fix capitalization for “API group”

* Tweak wording

* Avoid using deprecated generator in example

* add Antrea description in dev-1.17 (#17919)

* Promote VolumeSubpathEnvExpansion to GA

* Reference Documentation for the Kubernetes API for 1.17 (#18019)

* Update feature-gates.md (#18033)

* Reference Documentation for kubectl Commands for 1.17 (#18017)

* Update for v1.17 (#18034)

* Update config.toml(release-1.17) for 1.17 (#18031)
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