Storyboard wallet_quickstart Simplified Chinese #132
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Ready for review. Pinging @xjmzx @Lafudoci and @XMRNoblesse if anyone of you can check it out. Thank you. |
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Thank you @XMRNoblesse. Pinging @almutsim to check the review. |
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Pinging @almutsim to approve the suggested changes. |
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What's the status of this? waiting for @al-mutasim review or ready to merge? |
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Looks great. The paragraph starting on line 30 should be changed to the following two paragraphs (to clarify the use of keys): 需要注意的是门罗币有两种密钥：一种是查阅密钥，用于查看转账过程，但查阅密钥不能用于交易及提币；另一种是支付密钥，拥有了支付密钥您就拥有了这一笔门罗币，您可以对这笔门罗币进行提币及交易。 轻钱包也有两种类型:查阅密钥保护型和查阅密钥分享型。查阅密钥保护型轻钱包会保持您的查阅密钥完全私有，因此必须下载区块链，或至少下载在钱包创建日期之后的部分，以计算钱包中的门罗币的余额。另一方面，查阅密钥分享型轻钱包与运行远程节点的服务器共享查阅密钥，以计算服务器上钱包的结算情况。这些高效钱包有时被称为钱包应用程序。如果由于允许查阅交易的过程，而导致运行拥有查阅密钥的远程节点的服务器不受信任，那么查阅密钥的分享就会导致隐私性的降低。不过，请注意，有时钱包持有人共享用于审计的查阅密钥——它不允许进行门罗币转账。 Also, line 93 should start Trezor... (rather than Ledger...) Other than that, it looks good. |
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@al-mutasim did the changes in line 30 and 93. This should be then ready.
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Hey @erciccione,
Submitting the storyboard wallet_quickstart_zh-hans.md file. Sign on behalf of @almutsim.
Needs a review.
Maybe @Lafudoci or @XMRNoblesse can help us out in the review.
:)