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One of the comments we got at the N-API workshop
at NodeConfEU was that we should have a better link to
node-addon-api and the docs in the main API docs for
N-API. The goal being to help people find node-addon-api
and potentially start with the node-addon-api docs
instead if they are using C++.

This expands and strengthens the link along with a
recommendation that starting with the node-addon-api
docs might make sense.

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Trott commented Nov 15, 2018

Note for whoever lands this: first line of commit message seems to have a typo?

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part of N-API, nor will they be maintained as part of Node.js. One such
example is: [node-addon-api](https://github.com/nodejs/node-addon-api).
and different compiler levels. **However, a C++ API can be easier to use
in many cases.** In order to support using C++ the project maintains a
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Do we really need to add bold text here? (No strong opinion other than we have a tendency to overuse bold and italics so it always seems worth asking.)

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If you really want people to take notice of the sentence, make it more direct by getting rid of qualifiers like "However" and "in many cases" so it's just:

A C++ API can be easier to use.

Maybe even set it off as its own single-sentence paragraph if it's that important.

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In order to -> To

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Comma needed after C++

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obj["foo"] = String::New(env, "bar");
```

what actually gets used in the addon is:
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Splitting the sentence up with examples and having this fragment here makes it pretty hard to read/understand IMO.

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This wrapper provides an inlineable C++ API. Binaries built
with `node-addon-api` will depend on the symbols for the N-API C based
functions exported by Node.js. `node-addon-api` can be seen as a more
efficient way to write code that calls N-API. For example if the following
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Comma needed after example

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C++ wrapper module called
[node-addon-api](https://github.com/nodejs/node-addon-api).
This wrapper provides an inlineable C++ API. Binaries built
with `node-addon-api` will depend on the symbols for the N-API C based
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C based -> C-based

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Is this sentence necessary? Can it be removed? It might be my lack of domain knowledge here, but it's unclear to me why this sentence is necessary given the surrounding material.

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I think it's a key point so I'd like to leave it in.

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While the concepts in the following sections are still useful when
using `node-addon-api` instead of the C APIs, it may make sense
to start with the API docs for `node-addon-api` instead.
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This sentence is long, complicated, and contains too many qualifiers. How about splitting it up into at least two sentences? Also, provide a link to the API docs you're recommending people use?

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Maybe all it really needs to be is?:

When using `node-addon-api` instead of the C APIs, start with the API docs for node-addon-api.

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```

The end result is that the addon only uses the exported C APIs and as a result
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The end result is that the addon only uses the exported C APIs and as a result
The end result is that the addon only uses the exported C APIs. As a result, it

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[node-addon-api](https://github.com/nodejs/node-addon-api).
This wrapper provides an inlineable C++ API. Binaries built
with `node-addon-api` will depend on the symbols for the N-API C based
functions exported by Node.js. `node-addon-api` can be seen as a more
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functions exported by Node.js. `node-addon-api` can be seen as a more
functions exported by Node.js. `node-addon-api` is a more

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with `node-addon-api` will depend on the symbols for the N-API C based
functions exported by Node.js. `node-addon-api` can be seen as a more
efficient way to write code that calls N-API. For example if the following
`node-addon-api` code is written:
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Maybe replace the whole lead-up here with this:

Take, for example, the following `node-addon-api` code: 

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obj["foo"] = String::New(env, "bar");
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what actually gets used in the addon is:
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what actually gets used in the addon is:
What actually gets used in the addon is:

One of the comments we got at the N-API workshop
at NodeConfEU was that we should have a better link to
node-addon-api and the docs in the main API docs for
N-API. The goal being to help people find node-addon-api
and potentially start with the node-addon-api docs
instead if they are using C++.

This expands and strengthens the link along with a
recommendation that starting with the node-addon-api
docs might make sense.
@mhdawson mhdawson force-pushed the improve-node-addon-api-reference branch from f778998 to 7659fc1 Compare November 15, 2018 14:16
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@Trott I believe I've addressed your comments.

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part of N-API, nor will they be maintained as part of Node.js. One such
example is: [node-addon-api](https://github.com/nodejs/node-addon-api).
and different compiler levels. A C++ API can be easier to use
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Nit: Seeing a line starting with a dot, seems not correct.

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functions exported by Node.js. `node-addon-api` is a more
efficient way to write code that calls N-API. Take, for example, the
following `node-addon-api` code. The first section shows the
`node-add-api` code and the section section shows what actually gets
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node-addon-api, right?

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Also, there are two "section"s.

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@thefourtheye thanks for the comments, I believe I've addressed them now.

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Doc form LGTM)

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mhdawson commented Nov 16, 2018

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CI good landing.

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@mhdawson mhdawson closed this Nov 16, 2018
mhdawson added a commit that referenced this pull request Nov 16, 2018
One of the comments we got at the N-API workshop
at NodeConfEU was that we should have a better link to
node-addon-api and the docs in the main API docs for
N-API. The goal being to help people find node-addon-api
and potentially start with the node-addon-api docs
instead if they are using C++.

This expands and strengthens the link along with a
recommendation that starting with the node-addon-api
docs might make sense.

PR-URL: #24371
Reviewed-By: Sakthipriyan Vairamani <thechargingvolcano@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Vse Mozhet Byt <vsemozhetbyt@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Franziska Hinkelmann <franziska.hinkelmann@gmail.com>
targos pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Nov 18, 2018
One of the comments we got at the N-API workshop
at NodeConfEU was that we should have a better link to
node-addon-api and the docs in the main API docs for
N-API. The goal being to help people find node-addon-api
and potentially start with the node-addon-api docs
instead if they are using C++.

This expands and strengthens the link along with a
recommendation that starting with the node-addon-api
docs might make sense.

PR-URL: #24371
Reviewed-By: Sakthipriyan Vairamani <thechargingvolcano@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Vse Mozhet Byt <vsemozhetbyt@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Franziska Hinkelmann <franziska.hinkelmann@gmail.com>
rvagg pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Nov 28, 2018
One of the comments we got at the N-API workshop
at NodeConfEU was that we should have a better link to
node-addon-api and the docs in the main API docs for
N-API. The goal being to help people find node-addon-api
and potentially start with the node-addon-api docs
instead if they are using C++.

This expands and strengthens the link along with a
recommendation that starting with the node-addon-api
docs might make sense.

PR-URL: #24371
Reviewed-By: Sakthipriyan Vairamani <thechargingvolcano@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Vse Mozhet Byt <vsemozhetbyt@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Franziska Hinkelmann <franziska.hinkelmann@gmail.com>
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codebytere pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Jan 12, 2019
One of the comments we got at the N-API workshop
at NodeConfEU was that we should have a better link to
node-addon-api and the docs in the main API docs for
N-API. The goal being to help people find node-addon-api
and potentially start with the node-addon-api docs
instead if they are using C++.

This expands and strengthens the link along with a
recommendation that starting with the node-addon-api
docs might make sense.

PR-URL: #24371
Reviewed-By: Sakthipriyan Vairamani <thechargingvolcano@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Vse Mozhet Byt <vsemozhetbyt@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Franziska Hinkelmann <franziska.hinkelmann@gmail.com>
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codebytere pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Jan 29, 2019
One of the comments we got at the N-API workshop
at NodeConfEU was that we should have a better link to
node-addon-api and the docs in the main API docs for
N-API. The goal being to help people find node-addon-api
and potentially start with the node-addon-api docs
instead if they are using C++.

This expands and strengthens the link along with a
recommendation that starting with the node-addon-api
docs might make sense.

PR-URL: #24371
Reviewed-By: Sakthipriyan Vairamani <thechargingvolcano@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Vse Mozhet Byt <vsemozhetbyt@gmail.com>
Reviewed-By: Franziska Hinkelmann <franziska.hinkelmann@gmail.com>
@mhdawson mhdawson deleted the improve-node-addon-api-reference branch September 30, 2019 13:13
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