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Remove colloquialism "hold on" #6805

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I'm of the thought that documentation should balance between conversational grammar and formal grammar. Hold on pushes that over the conversational boundary, in my opinion. Thoughts?

I'm of the thought that documentation should balance between conversational grammar and formal grammar. Hold on pushes that over the conversational boundary, in my opinion. Thoughts?
@@ -32,8 +32,8 @@ take a look at the :doc:`Form Events </form/events>` documentation.
Customizing your Form Based on the Underlying Data
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Before jumping right into dynamic form generation, hold on and recall what
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I agree on the tone which is slightly different here compared to the rest of the documentation.
If hold on is removed I think jumping right into should also be changed as it relates to each other.

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I agree. I'll think of something in place of jumping right into and update the PR.

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snoek09 commented Aug 1, 2016

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Thanks @micheal

Re-add the :: and change the wording for `jumping right into`.
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Thanks. I've updated as per above.

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Right or wrong, I prioritize language that i be energetic and engaging, above formal or informal. But, that's just my opinion, and I don't think this modification is less energetic/engaging anyways.

Thanks @micheal!

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