Editorial pass #39
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- Update spec names - Editorial nits, remove trailing "." from list items - Update Charter history
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Proposed one more change 0ca6676, while not strictly editorial, rolled it into this branch for convenience. |
Both Ambient Light Sensor and Proximity Sensor specs are now based on the Generic Sensor API and published on the Standards Track.
dontcallmedom
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Sep 28, 2017
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| <h1 id="title">[DRAFT] Device and Sensors Working Group Charter</h1> | |||
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| <p><em>This is a draft revised Device APIs Working Group (renamed Device and Sensors Working Group) charter for discussion. It has no standing. See also the <a href="https://www.w3.org/2016/03/device-sensors-wg-charter.html">charter under which the Device APIs Working Group</a> currently operates.</em></p> | |||
| <p><em>This is a draft revised Device APIs Working Group (renamed Device and Sensors Working Group) charter for discussion. It has no standing. See also the <a href="https://www.w3.org/2016/03/device-sensors-wg-charter.html">charter under which the Device and Sensors Working Group</a> currently operates.</em></p> | |||
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maybe flip the first: Device APIs Working Group (renamed Device and Sensors Working Group) -> Device and Sensors Working Group (formerly known as Device APIs Working Group); or drop the mention of Device APIs completely?
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@dontcallmedom, I pushed b265f79 to this branch since your previous comment, PTAL. |
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still LGTM :) |
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Feel free to merge. If I find other editorial changes I can open another PR. (btw. what is the DL to get editorial changes in?) |
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it would be good to get all changes in before next Tuesday, so that we can bring this to W3C management review next Wednesday |
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PTAL @dontcallmedom