Don't use personal pronouns where unnecessary #201
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| <li>Ruby is used to display the reading or the meaning of the base characters. | |||
| I therefore consider avoiding misreadings as the number one priority. | |||
| Therefore, avoiding misreadings is treated here as the number one priority. | |||
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Hmm. How about:
Therefore, the number one priority here is to avoid misreadings.
Just seems to flow a little better.
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Fixes #198