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88 changes: 49 additions & 39 deletions data/campaigns/The_South_Guard/scenarios/01_Born_to_the_Banner.cfg
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[message]
speaker=Deoran
message= _ "Look! There is smoke coming from Westin. That can only mean that bandits have overrun the garrison and are sacking the city!"
message= _ "Look there! Smoke rises from Westin! The bandits must have already overrun the garrison and are sacking the city!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Sir Gerrick
message= _ "If too much time passes and they are unchecked, they will leave the city in ruins and make a great slaughter of all who live therein. We must act quickly."
message= _ "Then we must make haste before they leave the city in ruins and slaughter all who live therein."
[/message]

{HIGHLIGHT_IMAGE 22 16 items/gohere.png ()}

[message]
speaker=Urza Nalmath
message= _ "What?! If there are soldiers of Wesnoth coming from the northern forts, then my brother Mathin is surely dead... They will pay for his death, just as Sir Loris paid for his pride!"
message= _ "What?! Those soldiers come from the northern forts... this can only mean my brother Mathin is dead. Those fiends! They will pay for his death!"
[/message]

[objectives]
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id=Minister Hylas
[/have_unit]
[/show_if]
description= _ "Kill Urza Nalmath, the bandit leader"
description= _ "Defeat Urza Nalmath, the bandit leader"
condition=win
[/objective]
[objective]
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[then]
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "At last the citadel is secured."
message= _ "At last, the citadel is secure."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Sir Gerrick
message= _ "Now, Deoran, take your post of command at the Citadel of Westin."
message= _ "Excellent, but there is still no sign of Sir Loris. Sir Deoran, you should take command of the keep."
[/message]
[show_objectives][/show_objectives]
[/then]
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[message]
speaker=Deoran
image=portraits/deoran-mad.png
message= _ "More bandits?! They’ll feel the deadly bite of my lance!"
message= _ "More bandits?! Prepare to die!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Minister Hylas
message= _ "Peace! For I am no enemy. I am Minister Hylas, advisor to Sir Loris! You came just in time! We couldn’t have held them off another day..."
message= _ "Peace, I am a friend! I am Hylas, advisor to Sir Loris and Chief Minister of the town council. Thanks to your timely arrival, the city is saved!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Deoran
message= _ "Indeed, our arrival was timely. But where is Sir Loris? Where is the garrison of the city? I was sent by Haldric to relieve him and take command of the South Guard, for the King has heard no news from Westin in two months."
message= _ "Indeed, we have defeated most of the bandits in the city. But where is Sir Loris? And where is the city garrison?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Minister Hylas
message= _ "Alas, Sir Loris will find no relief now. He is buried northwest of the city where he fell. For weeks we warned him of the new power of these bandits. And yet he would never lead his men against them until their strength had waxed and ours waned."
message= _ "Alas, Sir Loris fell in battle several days ago. For weeks, we warned him of the new power of these bandits, yet he would never lead his men against them until their strength had become too great for us to handle. I sent a messenger to the king about our plight, but some misfortune must have befallen him, for you are the first reinforcements to arrive here. If only Sir Loris had sent a rider earlier, he might have survived long enough to stand with us here."
[/message]

[if]
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[message]
speaker=Deoran
image=portraits/deoran-sad.png
message= _ "It grieves me to learn of his death, foolish though he may have been! Now, though, there are more pressing matters. Rise, men of Wesnoth! We must drive these bandits from our city!"
message= _ "Indeed. Foolish though he may have been, it still grieves me to learn of his death. With him gone, it seems that I must lead the townsfolk against the bandits and drive them from our city."
[/message]

{NAMED_LOYAL_UNIT 1 Peasant 18 15 (Ufes) (_"Ufes")}
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[message]
speaker=Ufes
message= _ "We will do our best to hold the city — you lead your men across the river and kill the bandit leader!"
message= _ "We stand with you, Sir Deoran! We will hold the city while you lead your men across the river and defeat the bandit leader!"
[/message]

[show_objectives][/show_objectives]
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[message]
speaker=Deoran
image=portraits/deoran-sad.png
message= _ "It grieves me to learn of his death, foolish though he may have been! At least we managed to defeat some of these bandits here and now. What else happened?"
message= _ "Indeed. Foolish though he may have been, it still grieves me to learn of his death. At least we have managed to defeat some of the bandits now. What else happened?"
[/message]
# Peasants have already been spawned.
[fire_event]
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[then]
[message]
speaker=Sir Gerrick
message= _ "They are almost to the great hall! Hurry, Deoran! We must reach the citadel or all will be lost!"
message= _ "They are almost to the great hall! Hurry, Deoran! We must reach the citadel before it is stormed by the bandits!"
[/message]

#ifdef EASY
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[then]
[message]
speaker=Sir Gerrick
message= _ "We’re too late! They’re burning the city..."
message= _ "We’re too late! They have burned the whole city..."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Deoran
image=portraits/deoran-sad.png
message= _ "Westin has fallen! This is a problem too great for me to handle — I must return to Haldric and tell him of our loss..."
message= _ "Alas, Westin has fallen! There is nothing else I can do here — I can only return to the King and report our loss here..."
[/message]

[endlevel]
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[message]
speaker=Urza Nalmath
message= _ "Now the Guard will feel the wrath of my new friends! It is time for the dead to wage war! Rise, warriors!"
message= _ "Now, the South Guard will feel the wrath of my new allies! Rise again, my undead warriors!"
[/message]

[event]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Minister Hylas
message= _ "He has made some pact with the undead. How could a mere brigand have gained such great powers?"
message= _ "This development is troubling to me as well. He must have made some pact with the undead, but how could a mere brigand gain such powers?"
scroll=no
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Deoran
message= _ "However he has done this fell thing, we must defeat him!"
message= _ "It matters not. No matter how he has done this fell thing, we must defeat him!"
scroll=no
[/message]

#ifdef EASY
[message]
speaker=narrator
image="units/human-magi/white-mage-magic-1.png~RC(magenta>red)"
message= _ "Not only will Minister Hylas’s <i>arcane</i> attack melt undead bones, but he can also heal wounded units near him."
message= _ "Minister Hylas can heal allied units near him and his <i>arcane</i> attack deals bonus damage to undead foes."
scroll=no
[/message]
#endif
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[message]
speaker=Urza Nalmath
message= _ "Leave nothing standing! Burn their villages down and kill them all!"
message= _ "Leave nothing standing! Raze their villages and kill them all!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "We will avenge your brother’s death!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Sir Gerrick
message= _ "They are burning our villages! We must stop them!"
message= _ "They are burning our homes! We must stop them!"
[/message]
[/event]

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[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "My brother has died unavenged! What have we done?!"
message= _ "My brother has died unavenged! I have failed!"
[/message]

[kill]
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[message]
speaker=Minister Hylas
message= _ "Just before the bandit raids began, an ambassador came to Sir Loris from the elves of the Aethenwood west of here. He asked that a knight be sent to discuss a new threat to Wesnoth."
message= _ "Just before the bandit raids began, an ambassador came to Sir Loris from the elves of the Aethenwood. He asked that a knight be sent to discuss a new threat to Wesnoth."
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Deoran
message= _ "My men have been trained to fight the living. I do not know that we can protect the city from foes so dark as these. I shall go meet the elves and see if they can be of any aid!"
message= _ "My men have been trained to fight the living. I do not know that we can protect the city from foes as unnatural as these by ourselves. It is probably best that I meet the elves in hope that their counsel will be of some aid."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Minister Hylas
message= _ "I will accompany you, my lord. I have studied the arts of holy magic and my skill may be of some use against the dark ones."
message= _ "I will accompany you, Sir Deoran. I have studied sacred arts and my skills may be of some use against the dark ones."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=narrator
message= _ "Deoran sent a rider to request mounted reinforcements and set out at once towards the Aethenwood..."
image=wesnoth-icon.png
speaker=Deoran
message= _ "Very well. Although it will probably take too long to send word to the King for reinforcements, I remember there being a small outpost within a couple day's ride of here. I will send a message to them asking for a few riders, then we should make haste toward the Aethenwood to find the elves."
[/message]

{CLEAR_VARIABLE citadel_secured}
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