DiD S1: touch up dialogue

data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/scenarios/01_Saving_Parthyn.cfg

@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
         # Drogan uses 'I' here because he thinks of himself in charge when technically, Dela or Malin should be (as the children of the Baron)
         # He also does this later when he tells them to be quiet and to stop bickering
         [part]
-            story= _ "Drogan, the captain of the guard, replied, <i>“Nay, ya surely know that tha law says the penalty for necromancy is death. But, since you’ve saved our town, I’ll let ya rest here for up ta three days. No more than that. After, I’m banishing you from Parthyn. If ya return, we’ll attack ya on sight.”</i>"
+            story= _ "Drogan, the captain of the guard, replied, <i>“Nay, ya surely know that tha law says tha penalty for necromancy is death. But, since you’ve saved our town, I’ll let ya rest here for up ta three days. No more than that. After, I’m banishing you from Parthyn. If ya return, we’ll attack ya on sight.”</i>"
             {STORYTXT_BACKGROUND_BIGMAP_DID}
         [/part]
         [part]
@@ -242,7 +242,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Drogan
-            message= _ "Quit bickerin’, you two. With most of them orcs dead now, their camps’ll be lots weaker. Our raiders will clear ’em out and leave us a quiet summer."
+            message= _ "Quit bickerin’, you two. With most o’ them orcs dead now, their camps will be lots weaker. Our raiders will clear ’em out and leave us a quiet summer."
         [/message]
 
         [scroll_to]
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Drogan
-            message= _ "What? Curses! Why’re thar still so many of ’em?"
+            message= _ "What? Curses! Why’re thar still so many o’ ’em?"
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Drogan
-            message= _ "Quiet, you. Malin, you’ve got to hold the river fort, or they’ll overrun us. Tha raidin’ party should be back in two days ta help us fight ’em off. For now, I’ll send tha remaining guards to help ya."
+            message= _ "Quiet, you. Malin, you’ve got ta hold tha river fort or they’ll overrun us. Tha raidin’ party should be back in two days ta help us fight ’em off. Fer now, I’ll send tha remaining guards to help ya."
         [/message]
     [/event]
 
@@ -284,7 +284,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Drogan
-            message= _ "What in blazes is that... that thing? Has tha necromancer returned already? His timing couldn’t be any worse..."
+            message= _ "What in blazes is that... that thing? Has tha necromancer returned already? His timin’ couldn’t be any worse..."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -396,7 +396,7 @@
         [/filter]
 
         [message]
-            speaker=Drogan
+            speaker=Malin Keshar
             message= _ "The orcs have broken through. Parthyn is open to attack!"
         [/message]
 
@@ -522,7 +522,8 @@
 
                 [message]
                     speaker=Drogan
-                    message= _ "Aye, better that than ta even dabble in dark magic. We woulda rebuilt this place like always. Even if I died, it woulda at least been with dignity. Too bad tha mages didn’t teach ya more sense."
+                    # po: ’least is short for at least
+                    message= _ "Aye, better that than ta even dabble in dark magic. We woulda rebuilt this place like always. Even if I died, ’least it woulda been with dignity. Too bad tha mages didn’t teach ya more sense."
                 [/message]
 
                 [message]
@@ -573,7 +574,7 @@
             [else]
                 [message]
                     speaker=Drogan
-                    message= _ "Bravely done holdin’ off them orcs by yerself, Malin. But we’re not outta trouble yet. The raidin’ party reports that more warlords be gatherin’ their armies in the hills, just a few days north o’ the Great River. I don’t know if we can fight ’em all off."
+                    message= _ "Bravely done holdin’ off them orcs by yerself, Malin. But we’re not outta trouble yet. The raidin’ party reports that more warlords be gatherin’ their armies in the hills, just a few days north o’ tha Great River. I don’t know if we can fight ’em all off."
                 [/message]
 
                 [message]
@@ -603,7 +604,7 @@
 
                 [message]
                     speaker=Drogan
-                    message= _ "If ya go out on a quest to seek depravity, no one will support ya."
+                    message= _ "If ya go out on a quest to seek depravity, none of us will support ya."
                 [/message]
 
                 # Hint that the loyal units stay behind