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{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND_BIGMAP_DID}
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Malin quickly found that he had considerable talent, especially for arcane sorcery and manipulating the essence of life. In time, however, he grew bored of his studies and began to research magics that were far beyond the teachings of his masters. Despite Malin’s substantial skill, his lack of experience led to a series of failed experiments, one of which cost the life of a fellow student. For his transgressions, he was expelled."
story= _ "Malin quickly found that he had considerable talent, especially for arcane sorcery and manipulating the essence of life. In time, however, he grew bored of his studies and began to research magics that were far beyond the teachings of his masters. Despite Malin’s substantial skill, his lack of experience led to a series of failed experiments, one of which took the life of a fellow student. For his transgressions, he was expelled."
{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND_BIGMAP_DID}
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "By the time Malin returned to Parthyn, orcs had already begun to attack the city. Although he tried his best to fight them off, the raids were far more relentless and the town guard was far weaker than he had remembered. One night, a particularly powerful strike stormed the city and Malin could only watch as his father was cut down by one of the savage orcish warriors."
story= _ "When Malin returned to Parthyn, orcs had already begun to attack the city. Although he tried his best to fight them off, the raids were far more relentless and the town guard was far weaker than he had remembered. One night, a particularly powerful strike stormed the city and Malin could only watch as his father was cut down by one of the savage orcish warriors."
{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND_BIGMAP_DID}
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Shaken by the loss of their commander, the human defense began to falter. The orcs roared in anticipation of victory, but before they could overrun the city, skeleton warriors poured out of the woods to their rear. The undead cut down orc after orc, swords and axes hacking through flesh and bone with ruthless efficiency. The soldiers watched on in half amazement, half fear as the orcs dropped and the skeletons turned toward them, empty eyes bleeding with fetid magic. All was dreadfully still as the blood and carnage settled in the rank darkness."
story= _ "Shaken by the loss of their commander, the human defense began to falter. The orcs roared in anticipation of victory, but before they could overrun the city, skeleton warriors poured out of the woods to their rear. The undead cut down orc after orc, swords and axes hacking through flesh and bone with ruthless efficiency. The soldiers watched in half amazement, half fear as the orcs dropped and the skeletons turned toward them, empty eyes bleeding with fetid magic. All was dreadfully still as the blood and carnage settled in the rank darkness."
{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND_BIGMAP_DID}
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[part]
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{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND_BIGMAP_DID}
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Malin, troubled by his father’s death and the strength of the orcish assault, argued to no avail that Darken Volk be allowed to stay. After a couple days, the necromancer left Parthyn without incident."
story= _ "Malin, troubled by his father’s death and the strength of the orcish assault, argued to no avail that Darken Volk be allowed to stay. After a couple days, the necromancer left Parthyn without incident. A week passed..."
{STORYTXT_BACKGROUND_BIGMAP_DID}
[/part]
[/story]
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[event]
name=start

[message]
speaker=narrator
image=wesnoth-icon.png
message= _ "Several days pass..."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Was it really a good idea to send out a raiding party so soon after the orcs just attacked us? Even father is no longer here anymore..."
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[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Not like we needed him. I cannot believe that you would even think about trusting a necromancer!"
message= _ "Not like we needed him. I cannot believe that you would even consider trusting a necromancer!"
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "So much for quiet, Drogan. Orcs mass north of the river!"
message= _ "So much for quiet, Drogan. Orcs amass north of the river!"
[/message]

[message]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Kreg'a'shar Trr
message= _ "More humans! This battle will be too difficult now. I should retreat."
message= _ "More humans! We will need the Chief if we are to fight them now. Grunts, retreat!"
[/message]

[kill]
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[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Die, foul orcs!"
message= _ "The orcs are dead!"
[/message]

[endlevel]
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[then]
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "By all rights, I should have you executed on the spot, Malin. I cannot believe you let that necromancer corrupt you. I suppose part of this is my fault since I was the one who allowed him into Parthyn, nevertheless... Since I showed him mercy, I will show the same to you. You are hereby banished from Parthyn."
message= _ "By all rights, I should have you executed on the spot, Malin. I cannot believe you let that necromancer corrupt you. I suppose part of this is my fault since I was the one who allowed him into Parthyn; nevertheless ... Since I showed him mercy, I will show the same to you. You are hereby banished from Parthyn."
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "Aye, better that than to dabble in dark magic. People would have rebuilt the town, just as they always have before. Even had I died, it would at least have been with dignity. If only the mages had taught you more sense."
message= _ "Aye, better that than to even dabble in dark magic. People would have rebuilt the town, just as they always have before. Even had I died, it would at least have been with dignity. Would the mages had taught you more sense."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "I only did it to protect those who I care about. You won’t truly banish me, will you, Drogan?"
message= _ "I only did it to protect those whom I care about. You won’t truly banish me, will you, Drogan?"
[/message]

[message]
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[else]
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "That was bravely done, lad, holding the orcs off by yourself. The mages taught you well. But the raiding party brings grave news from the north. More warlords have begun to mass armies in their hill forts, no more than a few days north of the Great River. I do not know if we possess the strength to fight them off."
message= _ "That was bravely done, lad, holding the orcs off by yourself. The mages taught you well. But I fear the raiding party brings grave news from the north. More warlords have begun to mass armies in their hill forts, no more than a few days north of the Great River. I do not know if we possess the strength to fight them off."
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "I will pretend like I did not hear that."
message= _ "I will pretend I did not hear that."
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "Nobody will support you in your quest for depravity."
message= _ "Should you embark on a quest to seek out depravity, none of us will support you."
[/message]

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