DiD: add more po-hints

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wesnoth · Feb 6, 2020 · 5a7185b · 5a7185b
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diff --git a/data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/scenarios/01_Saving_Parthyn.cfg b/data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/scenarios/01_Saving_Parthyn.cfg
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@
     [story]
         [part]
             music=elvish-theme.ogg
-
-            # po: comments about dialogue style and characterization **THIS TEXT CONTAINS SPOILERS**:
-            # po:
+            #                          **THIS TEXT CONTAINS SPOILERS**
+            # po: Comments about dialogue style and characterization:
+            #
             # po: Drogan: although he is the captain of Parthyn's guard, he shows signs of recklessness and inflexibility; he's stiff and stubborn, which causes him to butt heads with Malin
             # po:           often, we see that Drogan says something to Malin (e.g. banishing him) without a clearly good reason why, and that's because of his ego and confidence in his own righteousness
             # po: Darken Volk: he talks a little more formally than Malin, and has quite a few ellipses in his speech. These are at points where he's not speaking exactly what he's thinking in his head because in reality,
@@ -474,12 +474,12 @@
                     message= _ "Yes, yes it is. Nobody will support you on your path to depravity."
                 [/message]
 
-                # Hint that the loyal units stay behind
+                # po: Hint, that the loyal units stay behind
                 [message]
                     side=1
                     race=human
                     [not]
-                        id=Malin Keshar
+                        id=Malin Keshar,Dela Keshar,Drogan
                     [/not]
                     message= _ "We should all be glad to see you gone, necromancer. I detest having fought by your side."
                 [/message]
@@ -535,12 +535,12 @@
                     message= _ "Should you embark on a quest to seek out depravity, none of us will support you."
                 [/message]
 
-                # Hint that the loyal units stay behind
+                # po: Hint, that the loyal units stay behind
                 [message]
                     side=1
                     race=human
                     [not]
-                        id=Malin Keshar
+                        id=Malin Keshar,Dela Keshar,Drogan
                     [/not]
                     message= _ "Better to die than to ally ourselves with a necromancer."
                 [/message]

diff --git a/data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/scenarios/03_A_Haunting_in_Winter.cfg b/data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/scenarios/03_A_Haunting_in_Winter.cfg
@@ -422,6 +422,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Malin Keshar
+            # po: In the sense of "Understood, I will do that", not "very good".
             message= _ "Very well."
         [/message]
 
@@ -609,6 +610,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Malin Keshar
+            # po: That's the case for both usages of this string.
             message= _ "Very well."
         [/message]
 

diff --git a/data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/scenarios/09_A_Small_Favor3.cfg b/data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/scenarios/09_A_Small_Favor3.cfg
@@ -875,6 +875,7 @@ Existence churns and the soul is reborn into endless night.</i>"
             [filter_location]
                 location_id=book_start
             [/filter_location]
+            # po: Spoken by a servant of Malin Keshar (death or alive one).
             message=_ "I have found the book, master!"
         [/message]
 
@@ -893,9 +894,9 @@ Existence churns and the soul is reborn into endless night.</i>"
                 [/message]
             [/then]
             [else]
-                # human or bat
                 [message]
                     id=Malin Keshar
+                    # po: The speaker addresses a human or a bat.
                     message=_ "Good! Guard it with your life while I come to fetch it."
                 [/message]
             [/else]