DiD S10: update dialogue

data/campaigns/Descent_Into_Darkness/scenarios/10_Alone_at_Last.cfg

@@ -317,7 +317,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Malin Keshar
-            message= _ "... have I really just been a pawn all this time?"
+            message= _ "After all this time... I haven’t just been a pawn to you... have I?"
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -340,17 +340,17 @@
 
         [message]
             role=advisor
-            message= _ "He will not help you, but perhaps the book might. You were the one who helped him retrieve it; it is rightfully yours!"
+            message= _ "He will not help you, but perhaps the book might. You were the one who helped him retrieve it. It is rightfully yours!"
         [/message]
 
         [message]
             speaker=Malin Keshar
-            message= _ "Yes, perhaps, I suppose that is right..."
+            message= _ "Yes, I suppose that is right..."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
             speaker=Malin Keshar
-            message= _ "Darken Volk! That book is as much mine as it is yours! Give it back, or I will have to take it by force!"
+            message= _ "Darken Volk! That book is as much mine as it is yours! Give it back, or I will take it by force!"
         [/message]
 
         [delay]
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Darken Volk
-            message= _ "Enough prattle from you, boy. Fighting the orcs is your ambition, not mine. You cannot expect me to help you in an endeavor that does not concern me at all."
+            message= _ "Fighting the orcs is your ambition, not mine. You cannot expect me to help you in an endeavor that does not concern me at all."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -563,7 +563,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Sir Cadaeus
-            message= _ "Your travels in this region have not gone unnoticed, necromancers! The disaster you wreaked upon the good city of Tath and the noble Lord Karres can only be paid back in turn with your blood and souls — whatever little may remain of them. Yes, on this day, you shall have to answer for your innumerable crimes."
+            message= _ "Your travels in this region have not gone unnoticed, necromancers! The disaster you wreaked upon the good city of Tath and the noble Lord Karres can only be paid back in turn with your blood. Yes, on this day, you shall have to answer for your innumerable crimes."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -620,7 +620,7 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Dela Keshar
-            message= _ "I finally found you, Malin! At last, you will have to pay for what you have done to my people and my home. I will not let you live to see another sunset."
+            message= _ "I finally found you, Malin! At last, you’ll pay fer what you’ve done to my people and my home. I won’t let you live ta see another sunset."
         [/message]
 
         [message]
@@ -630,7 +630,17 @@
 
         [message]
             speaker=Dela Keshar
-            message= _ "Did you not think I would keep my word? Attack him, men! Do not let the traitor escape!"
+            message= _ "You didn’t think I’d keep my word? You thought I’d forgive you fer killing Drogan and tearing apart our town? You don’t know how badly I want ta kill ya, Malin."
+        [/message]
+
+        [message]
+            speaker=Malin Keshar
+            message= _ "..."
+        [/message]
+
+        [message]
+            speaker=Dela Keshar
+            message= _ "Nothing to say this time? No quip ’bout how we don’t understand ya? No comment about yer moral superiority? I can only hope you’ll be so quiet when I kill you."
         [/message]
 
         {VARIABLE dela_arrived 1}
@@ -737,6 +747,9 @@
         [/message]
 
         {COLOR_ADJUST -20 -20 -20}
+        [delay]
+            time=1500
+        [/delay]
 
         [message]
             speaker=Malin Keshar