AToTB S02: The necromancer is leaving, not waiting for reinforcements #5815
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| message= _ "More elves are arriving; even if they believe me, the kidnappers’ trail is sure to fade before we can follow." |
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| message= _ "More elves are arriving; even if they believe me, the kidnappers’ trail is sure to fade before we can follow." | |
| message= _ "More elves are arriving! The kidnappers’ trail is sure to fade before we can follow." |
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Thanks. I'm going to leave the "even if they believe me" in, because it doesn't imply that Arvith could defeat the elvish reinforcements. I'm assuming a few scouts would slow down Arvith, and a large number of reinforcements would follow.
I guess the dark adept (who gets released alive at the start of S03) finds out that there's an army of elves following Arvith and waiting for the Council's decision; but that's not our protagonists' problem.
Also change a line from the elves, so that it changes from sympathy to defense instead of a sudden swing from sympathy to aggression.
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Also change a line from the elves, so that it changes from sympathy to defense
instead of a sudden swing from sympathy to aggression.
@Earth-Cake, @Konrad22, @Lordlewis6 and @nemaara: this is a follow-up to #5255. I'm assuming that AToTB won't be replaced with a rewritten version in time for 1.16, so want to improve up the existing dialogue.