Edits to be made to code/final word document based on RPTS editorial review (Jim Lee)

[liz-dawson]

• Vessel prefix F/V should be FV (no slash).
• Be sure to double-check all internal and external links in document --jk kill all hyperlinks minus websites
  • I auto removed hyperlinks! - Em
• insert 2 page breaks after abstract (one blank page after abstract), then add contents page. "use dot leaders"
• Arial Narrow for major heading, Arial standard for level 1 headings?
• Seems unbalanced to have a narrow font as a major heading followed by a bold font as a lesser heading. Perceived heading ranking gets confusing. Liz switched these manually, Arial for Header 1 and Arial Narrow for Header 2
• change mt to t
• lowercase i for St. Matthew and St. Lawrence "islands" **I did this throughout code already...pretty sure I got them all.
• period after Figure X. then -- instead of long -, not bold, 12 pt @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA
• Fishing vessels FV Alaska Knight (left) and FV Vesteraalen (right) contracted to assist the 2018 Eastern Bering Sea bottom trawl survey.---Jim wants EBS spelled out in figure captions
• dates with preceding 0, 0 should be deleted like 03 June, should just be 3 June @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA
• Other select species including Pacific halibut, Greenland turbot, large skates, rockfish, Atka mackerel, prowfish, Bering wolffish, giant wrymouth, Pacific cod (add scientific names)
• Table 5. -- Biological data collected during the 2018 eEastern Bering Sea (EBS) shelf bottom trawl survey.---add full eastern Bering Sea (EBS) name to title (not just acronym)
• Table 5 lowercase lots of column headers: [x] Length measurements, [x] Otolith age structure measurements, Stomach samples, [x] Pathobiology blood samples @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA I couldn't figure out where to lowercase "samples" in Stomach samples column
• Table 9a, lowercase some column headers: Estimated biomass, SD biomass
• Table 9b, lowercase some column headers: Estimated population, SD population
• Lang, Richar, and Foy 2019). Lang et al. 2019, et al. when three or more authors @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA
• During the coldest years, sea ice extended farther south and lasted later into spring resulting in cold pools that extended farther south through the middle domain into Bristol Bay and near the Alaska Peninsula (Figs. 7a and 7b). Fig. should be changes to Figs.
• Change all (Figure X) to (Fig. X) and (Figures X and X) to (Figs. X and X)
• Recent Technical Memorandums
• Copies of this report and other NOAA Technical Memorandums are available from the National Technical Information Service, 5285 Port Royal Road, Springfield, VA 22167 (web site: www.ntis.gov). Paper and electronic (.pdf) copies vary in price. The recent Technical Memoranda produced by the Alaska Fisheries Science Center can be found at https://www.fisheries.noaa.gov/resource/publication-database/alaska-fisheries-science-center-technical-memorandums.--Not needed in text. This will be on cover materials.
• Reference Section should be renamed to "Citations"
• Acknowledgments misspelled (no e between g and m)
• No italics in citations
• Rerun Bottom Temperatures of Years Above Long-Term Mean Tempearture plot for 2018 @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA
• P/A vs. IDW plots: In all runs, I can only see P/A plots for: Longhead Dab, POP, Sakhalin sole, butterfly sculpin, bigmouth sculpin, Pacific capelin, rainbow smelt, eulachon, shortfin eelpout, and wattled eelpout----were these supposed to be IDW now? @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA
• RKC, BKC, snow and tanner crab IDW plots rerun @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA
• Yellow Irish lord--Irish was lowercase in species profile IDW caption, when it should be uppercase. I'm unsure where to change this to make it uppercase in future runs of this report @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA
• Tables in Appendix should be labled: Appendix Table A1. etc. Just need to add the word "Appendix" in front of Table in the Table Caption @EmilyMarkowitz-NOAA