Vinaigrette #85
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ancchi
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Jun 30, 2020
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Hi ZeroWing,
bis zur Zubereitung sieht es sehr gut aus.
Dann hast du aber zweimal die Überschrift "Zubereitung" und den ersten Satz drin und bei den Schritten 1 und 2 sind diverse (Schussel-) Fehler drin.
Vorschlag:
Den Satz "Bei Blattsalaten sollte die Vinaigrette erst kurz vor dem Servieren beigemischt werden, da der Salat sonst schnell "lädschig" wird, also nicht mehr so bissfest ist." als Tipp HINTER der Zubereitung mit der Überschrift "Tipp" hinzufügen.
Ansonsten den Satz natürlich bei Zubereitung rausnehmen und bei den Punkten 1 und 2 die Fehler korrigieren.
Viel Erfolg! ^^
Die Anmerkungen des Pull Request Reviewer umgesetzt (die Fehler waren natürlich absichtlich eingebaut) und um eine Zubereitungsvariante ergänzt
jetzt aber...
2 ist zwei
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