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Edit paragraph one to reorganize information and shorten paragraph length. Remove certain words to shorten paragraph. Condense some sentences too. Change order of information to (product uses) --> (download formats) --> (visual types and animation support).
two --> 2 download pack --> download the pack
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Hey @jwharrie, thanks for the suggestion! We will think it through. |
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Edit paragraph one to reorganize information and shorten paragraph length.
Remove certain words to shorten paragraph. Condense some sentences too.
Change order of information to (product uses) --> (download formats) --> (visual types and animation support).
Fixes #16