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diff --git a/app/views/member_mailer/welcome_coach.html.haml b/app/views/member_mailer/welcome_coach.html.haml
@@ -5,11 +5,11 @@
 
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   - if @member.subscriptions.any?
-    You'll receive email invitations to our workshops as soon as they are open for RSVP.
+    You'll start to receive email invitations to our events as soon as they are open for RSVP.
   - else
-    We send out invitations to our events via email.
+    We send out invitations to all our events via email.
     = link_to "Sign up on our subscriptions page", subscriptions_url
-    to receive invitations to our workshops.
+    to start receiving invitations to our events.
   Places are limited, so be sure to respond quickly if you would like to attend.
 
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@@ -23,33 +23,29 @@
   You will be notified at least three hours before the event if you receive a place.
 
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-  Our workshops start with around 30 minutes of socialising with food, before we assign
-  you to coach one or two students. They'll either be working on
+  Our in-person events start with around 30 minutes of socialising with food, before we assign
+  you to coach one or two students. Students may be working on
   = link_to "one of our tutorials", "http://tutorials.codebar.io/"
-  or looking for help with their own project. Don't worry if you're not an expert on
-  the topics - your role is not about having all the answers! Guiding a student through
-  solving their own problem is more useful in the long run. There are more
+  or looking for help with their own project. Don't worry if you're not an expert on the topics - your role is not about having all the answers! Guiding a student through solving their own problem is more useful in the long run. There are more
   =link_to "tips for coaching on the codebar website.", teaching_guide_url
 
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-  It's important to us that our workshops are a welcoming and accepting environment
+  It's important to us that our events are a welcoming and inclusive environment
   for everyone. Please make sure you
   = link_to "read our code of conduct", code_of_conduct_url
   before attending.
 
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-  If you have any questions, reply to this email or chat to one of the organisers at
-  the workshop. They'll be at a table with the name stickers. They're there to help
-  with anything on your mind.
+  If you have any questions, please do not hesitate to reach out to us. Either reply to this email or chat to one of the organisers at the event. They're there to help with anything on your mind.
 
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-  If you didn't mean to sign up as a coach, not to worry! You can always
+  If you didn't mean to sign up as a coach, not to worry! You can
   = link_to "change your subscriptions via our website here.", subscriptions_url
 
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-  We hope to see you at a workshop soon, and thank you so much for volunteering!
+  We hope to see you at an event very soon, and thank you so much for volunteering!
 
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   #{"-- "}
   %br
-  The codebar organisational team
+  The codebar team