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base/doc/ltnews38.tex

@@ -335,15 +335,15 @@ \section{Document properties and cross-referencing}
 The \pkg{hyperref} package adds the \cs{autoref} command, which
 tries to retrieve the name of a counter from the  \emph{logical name}
 used for a link target.
-The \pkg{tikzmarks} package records information about
- \emph{labelled positions} in pictures when using \pkg{tikz}.
+The \pkg{tikzmarks} library records information about
+ \emph{labelled positions} on the page when using \pkg{tikz}.
 Finally, the \pkg{zref} package implements many related ideas, including a general
 idea of properties and lists of properties, with methods to record, and
 subsequently access, the value of any declared property.
 
 
 %%FMi some rewrite:
-Starting with this release, the \LaTeX{} kernel now offers the handling general document
+Starting with this release, the \LaTeX{} kernel now offers the handling of general document
 properties as a core functionality with standard interfaces.
 %
 This is based on concepts introduced by the \pkg{zref}
@@ -363,7 +363,7 @@ \section{Document properties and cross-referencing}
 to be used when, for example, an unknown label is supplied.
 %%FMi added
 The final argument contains the code that produces the current
-property value when when recording the value is requested.
+property value when recording the value is requested.
 
 Then, to record the value of this new property,
 together with others, use this command.
@@ -404,7 +404,7 @@ \section{Document properties and cross-referencing}
 %% NOT as an Arabic number -- Arabic numbers are "something totally different"!!
 %%FMi changed:
 %\texttt{abspage} (the value of the \texttt{shipout count});
-\item[\texttt{abspage}] the current number of shipped out pages;
+\item[\texttt{abspage}] the current number of shipped out pages plus 1;
 %%FMi changed:
 %\texttt{counter}] (the name of the counter stepped in the (local) most recent \cs{refstepcounter});
 \item[\texttt{counter}] the name of the counter that produced the \emph{current \textup{\cs{ref}} value}, i.e.,