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Partial TL translations for white-paper.md - 1,025 words #12

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Continuation of my translations for this file. Please help me review my work. Thank you!

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Please update. Thanks.


When discussing the scalability of a system, it involves two main areas: Vertical scaling and horizontal scaling. Vertical scaling refers to the optimization of the processing workflow, allowing the system to take full advantage of existing equipment capacity. With this approach, limits of the system are easily reached, as series-based processing capacity is based on the hardware limit of a single device. When we need to scale the system, is there a way to transform the series system into a parallel system? Theoretically, we will only need to increase the number of devices, and we will be able to achieve almost unlimited scalability. Could we possibly achieve unlimited scaling in distributed blockchain networks? In other words, can the blockchain execute programs in parallel?
Kapag tayo ay nagtatalakay ng kakayahan sa pag-iskala ng isang sistema, ito ay nagsasangkot ng dalawang pangunahing mga lawak: Ang patayo na pag-iskala at pahalang na pag-iskala. Ang patayo na pag-iskala ay tumutukoy sa optimisasyon ng nagpoprosesong workflow, na nagpapahintulot sa sistema na magsamantala sa umiiral na kapasidad ng kagamitan. Sa diskarteng ito, ang mga limitasyon ng sistema ay madaling naabot, dahil ang series-based processing na kapasidad ay nakabase sa limitasyon ng hardware sa isang solong device. Kapag kailangan nating iiskala ang sistema, mayroon bang paraan upang mag-transform ng mga serye na sistema sa isang kahilera na sistema? Sa pagkateoretikal, kailangan lamang nating dagdagan ang bilang ng mga device, at maaari na nating makamit ang halos walang limitasyon na kakayahan sa pag-iskala. Pwede ba nating makamit ang walang limitasyon na pag-iskala sa ibinahaging mga blockchain network? Sa ibang salita, maaari bang magsagawa ang blockchain ng mga program na nakahilera?
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I would translate areas/lawak to aspect/aspeto or field/saklaw in tagalog.

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I would use bertikal instead of patayo

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take full advantage of / magsamantala to gamitin ng husto

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diskarteng to pamamaraang

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I would change madaling naabot to madaling maaabot since easily reached, I think, is in present perfect tense.

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device to aparato

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  • used aspeto
  • I have considered all your suggestions. Thank you.


The blockchain is a distributed ledger, that records a variety of state data and the rules governing the changes in state of these data. Smart contracts are used as carriers, to record these rules. Blockchains can process programs in parallel, only if, multiple smart contracts can be executed concurrently and in a non-sequential manner. Basically, if contracts do not interact with each other, or if the contract does not modify the same state data, at the same time, their execution is non-sequential and can be executed concurrently. Otherwise, it can only execute in series, following a sequential order, and the network is unable to scale horizontally.
Ang blockchain ay isang ibinahaging ledger, na nagtatala ng iba't-ibang estado ng datos at mga panuntunan na namamahala sa mga pagbabago sa estado ng mga datos na ito. Ang mga matalinong kontrata ay ginamit bilang mga carrier, upang magtala sa mga panuntunang ito. Ang mga blockchain ay maaaring magproseso ng mga program na nakahilera, lamang kung, ang maramihang mga matalinong kontrata ay maaaring maisagawa nang sabay-sabay at sa isang hindi magkasunod-sunod na paraan. Sa madaling salita, kung ang mga kontrata ay hindi nakikipag-ugnayan sa isa't isa, o kung ang kontrata ay hindi nagbabago ng parehong estado ng datos, sa parehong panahon, ang kanilang pagpapatupad ay hindi magkakasunod at maaaring isagawa nang sabay-sabay. Kung hindi, ito ay magsasagawa lamang nang nakaserye, na sumusunod sa isang magkakasunod na pagkakaayos, at ang network ay hindi maaaring mag-iskala nang pahalang.
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carrier to tagapagdala

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done.

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Hey @burdagay. Thank you for your comments. I have updated my work based on all of your inputs. :)


The blockchain is a distributed ledger, that records a variety of state data and the rules governing the changes in state of these data. Smart contracts are used as carriers, to record these rules. Blockchains can process programs in parallel, only if, multiple smart contracts can be executed concurrently and in a non-sequential manner. Basically, if contracts do not interact with each other, or if the contract does not modify the same state data, at the same time, their execution is non-sequential and can be executed concurrently. Otherwise, it can only execute in series, following a sequential order, and the network is unable to scale horizontally.
Ang blockchain ay isang ibinahaging ledger, na nagtatala ng iba't-ibang estado ng datos at mga panuntunan na namamahala sa mga pagbabago sa estado ng mga datos na ito. Ang mga matalinong kontrata ay ginamit bilang mga carrier, upang magtala sa mga panuntunang ito. Ang mga blockchain ay maaaring magproseso ng mga program na nakahilera, lamang kung, ang maramihang mga matalinong kontrata ay maaaring maisagawa nang sabay-sabay at sa isang hindi magkasunod-sunod na paraan. Sa madaling salita, kung ang mga kontrata ay hindi nakikipag-ugnayan sa isa't isa, o kung ang kontrata ay hindi nagbabago ng parehong estado ng datos, sa parehong panahon, ang kanilang pagpapatupad ay hindi magkakasunod at maaaring isagawa nang sabay-sabay. Kung hindi, ito ay magsasagawa lamang nang nakaserye, na sumusunod sa isang magkakasunod na pagkakaayos, at ang network ay hindi maaaring mag-iskala nang pahalang.
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done.


When discussing the scalability of a system, it involves two main areas: Vertical scaling and horizontal scaling. Vertical scaling refers to the optimization of the processing workflow, allowing the system to take full advantage of existing equipment capacity. With this approach, limits of the system are easily reached, as series-based processing capacity is based on the hardware limit of a single device. When we need to scale the system, is there a way to transform the series system into a parallel system? Theoretically, we will only need to increase the number of devices, and we will be able to achieve almost unlimited scalability. Could we possibly achieve unlimited scaling in distributed blockchain networks? In other words, can the blockchain execute programs in parallel?
Kapag tayo ay nagtatalakay ng kakayahan sa pag-iskala ng isang sistema, ito ay nagsasangkot ng dalawang pangunahing mga lawak: Ang patayo na pag-iskala at pahalang na pag-iskala. Ang patayo na pag-iskala ay tumutukoy sa optimisasyon ng nagpoprosesong workflow, na nagpapahintulot sa sistema na magsamantala sa umiiral na kapasidad ng kagamitan. Sa diskarteng ito, ang mga limitasyon ng sistema ay madaling naabot, dahil ang series-based processing na kapasidad ay nakabase sa limitasyon ng hardware sa isang solong device. Kapag kailangan nating iiskala ang sistema, mayroon bang paraan upang mag-transform ng mga serye na sistema sa isang kahilera na sistema? Sa pagkateoretikal, kailangan lamang nating dagdagan ang bilang ng mga device, at maaari na nating makamit ang halos walang limitasyon na kakayahan sa pag-iskala. Pwede ba nating makamit ang walang limitasyon na pag-iskala sa ibinahaging mga blockchain network? Sa ibang salita, maaari bang magsagawa ang blockchain ng mga program na nakahilera?
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  • used aspeto
  • I have considered all your suggestions. Thank you.

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Finished reviewing thanks!

@severinolorillajr severinolorillajr merged commit 41a7364 into neo-tl:master Mar 2, 2018
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