OONI Probe Mobile User Guide Update, 3.7.0 app version #1202
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sloncocs
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Aug 2, 2022
sloncocs
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- Updated screenshots
- Updated text of the user guide
Updated images for OONI Probe Mobile User Guide from 2nd August 2022
- Typos fixed - Formatting fixed - Debug logs and crash reports descriptions and instructions changed
OONI Probe Desktop App, version 3.7.0
- Updated text and numbers - Added links
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@sloncocs thank you for your thorough and amazing work on updating the OONI Probe Mobile guide! <3 I just finished reviewing your updates, and I've left some feedback as comments. To help provide a version of the guide that can be reviewed and deployed on the OONI website, please take note / review the following:
Thank you for your time and effort in updating this guide, and thank you for addressing my comments and checking the markdown. <3 |
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Thank you @sloncocs for your great work on updating the OONI Probe Desktop guide! <3
I just completed the review, and shared some feedback in the form of comments.
Similarly to my feedback for the OONI Probe Mobile guide, I'd suggest reviewing whether new images are formatted correctly (while being consistent with what is included in the relevant markdown sections), as well as checking for any other potential markdown issues that may be preventing deployment.
Thanks again for this great work! <3
Added piece: As mentioned in the previous sections, we also use third-parties services to optimise our work: * We use the open source [Matomo analytics platform](https://matomo.org/) to analyse the users' activity on our website. This platform does not use cookies and we do not track any personal data. We host this platform ourselves and do not collect any personal data to avoid any privacy-related risks for our users. * On OONI Explorer, we also use Sentry to log crash reports, which helps us improve the service. These reports include only the information about your device which we need to address the crash reports. Please check [Sentry Privacy Policy](https://sentry.io/privacy/), if you are not sure you want to share any information with them, please opt-out of sharing crash reports with us in the settings of your application.
Added text: As mentioned in the previous sections, we also use third-parties services to optimise our work: * We use the open source [Matomo analytics platform](https://matomo.org/) to analyse the users' activity on our website. This platform does not use cookies and we do not track any personal data. We host this platform ourselves and do not collect any personal data to avoid any privacy-related risks for our users. * On OONI Explorer, we also use Sentry to log crash reports, which helps us improve the service. These reports include only the information about your device which we need to address the crash reports. Please check [Sentry Privacy Policy](https://sentry.io/privacy/), if you are not sure you want to share any information with them, please opt-out of sharing crash reports with us in the settings of your application.
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@sloncocs I just finished reviewing the OONI Probe Desktop guide, and committed some edits. Thanks for the great work! I think the OONI Probe Desktop guide is ready for publication, once I've also reviewed the mobile guide and resolved Netlify issues.
Edited and restructured the "Accessing and sharing measurements" section
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I'm doing some additional quality control now that I'm able to preview the guides on Netlify. I'll commit some other minor edits before merging. |
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@sloncocs the OONI Probe Desktop guide is ready for publication, but the OONI Probe Mobile guide still needs some work. I committed several edits that also include a bit of restructuring of text and images (where needed, as observed through the Netlify deployment preview). Please make the following changes to the OONI Probe Mobile guide:
I think once the above are done (and reviewed) we may be ready to publish both user guides. :) Thanks so much for all your great work! I really love the new screenshots you added. <3 |
- added a new section - updated the date
- fixed images 9, 54, 73, 81 - added images 135, 136, 137, 138
I moved the position of images to match what is being said in the text. I also removed an image that shows URLs with HTTP.
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Thanks @sloncocs for addressing my feedback! I have reviewed the changes, and committed some edits to the "automated testing" and "OONI backend proxy" sections.
Final feedback: Please replace the 2nd screenshot under Step 5 (https://deploy-preview-1202--ooni.netlify.app/support/ooni-probe-mobile#testing-websites-of-your-choice) to say https://www.gutenberg.org (the URL is currently missing www, which is inconsistent with the text above).
