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Saving home energy using open organization principles #146

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RonMcFarland opened this issue Jul 16, 2022 · 15 comments
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Saving home energy using open organization principles #146

RonMcFarland opened this issue Jul 16, 2022 · 15 comments
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Much has been written about carbon free energy generation, but it might be more productive to look at how energy is used, and possibly wasted. I have written a 2-part article series on how particularly electrical energy could be used more efficiently based on the book "Reinventing Fire: Bold Business Solutions for the New Energy Era". It is based on research by the Rocky Mountain Institute. This article stresses the very important role Open Organization Principles play.
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This sounds interesting, @RonMcFarland. Looking forward to reading it!

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Bryan, I will share a draft of this article with you. I have already shared it with AmyJune just for her reference, as she was interested in the subject personally. I think it is best to get it into editing after my articles on industry disruption are into production.

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Seth made some comments in the doc, please take a look and let me know when its ready to hit the copy edit board. Thanks.

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AmyJune,
I can't seem to find Seth's comments. Are they in the Google Doc?

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My apologies. Seth made edits versus comments in the doc. You can view them in the edit history.

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RonMcFarland commented Aug 18, 2022 via email

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RonMcFarland commented Aug 18, 2022 via email

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AmyJune,
I just reviewed both parts of this article. Everything looks good to me.
Cheers,
Ron

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Great, I will move the doc into the general review board.

@semioticrobotic semioticrobotic changed the title Saving energy by using Open Organization Principles Saving energy using Open Organization Principles Aug 18, 2022
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AmyJuneH commented Aug 18, 2022 •
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FYI - the OSDC team split this into 2 tasks, one for each article.

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RonMcFarland commented Aug 18, 2022 via email

@semioticrobotic semioticrobotic changed the title Saving energy using Open Organization Principles Saving energy using Open Organization Principles (Part 1) Aug 19, 2022
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moved into copy editing on the OSDC side

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Hey there!

Saving energy using open organization principles (part one) is up for review

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https://opensource.com/preview-link/node/70181/01be6402-182b-491e-96a6-a1b251ee1cbe

I will also send in an email thread so edits and comments will be easy to parse

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Here are some very small changes.....

  1. In this sentence, "First, the building energy consultant makes an appointment with their most trusted electricity user and explains that they want the user to save money."  ..."their" should be changed to "his" and "they" to "he wants".2.  In this sentence, "The consultant also shows the electricity user the data below from Reinventing Fire, which confirms that it's worth the investment in energy-saving measures. "....."below" should be "above".3.  In this sentence, "Users can also consider where the light is shining Is it exactly where and when it is needed?"... a period is required between "shining" and "Is". 
    Those three above are all the small things I found that should be changed.

@semioticrobotic semioticrobotic changed the title Saving energy using Open Organization Principles (Part 1) Saving home energy using open organization principles Sep 1, 2022
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Scheduled to publish on September 05, 2022.

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