some tweaks

Author: tbrowder

doc/Language/about.pod6

@@ -4,21 +4,21 @@
 
 =SUBTITLE Documentation for the Perl 6 Documentation Project
 
-This documentation is an attempt to document the Perl 6 programming
+This document collection represents the on-going effort to document the Perl 6 programming
 language with the goals of being comprehensive, easy to use, easy to
 navigate, and useful to both newcomers and experienced Perl 6
-programmers.
+programmers alike.
 
 An HTML version of the documentation is located online at
 L<https://docs.perl6.org>.
 
 The official source for this documentation is located at L<perl6/doc on
 GitHub|https://github.com/perl6/doc>.
 
-The information in this document is a quick overview of the process
+The information in this particular document is a quick overview of the process
 described in more detail in L<CONTRIBUTING on GitHub|https://github.com/perl6/doc/CONTRIBUTING.md>.
-This document also provides a short introduction of writing the Perl 6
-POD files which produce these web pages.
+This document also provides a short introduction to writing the Perl 6
+POD files which produce the rendered pages in html or other formats.
 
 =head1 Structure