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Minor editorial fixes. #1656

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"indexes" occurs once while "indices" occurs six times, reconcile. Small grammar fixes. Position vertical arrow to center of block. Update figure captions (Post-Base Index only applies to Request Streams). Capitalize "Largest Reference" as it is done dozens of places elsewhere. Fix obsolete reference to "frames" on control streams.

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All good clean-ups. Thanks!

@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@ immediately. A stream becomes unblocked when the greatest absolute index in the
dynamic table becomes greater than or equal to the Largest Reference for all
header blocks the decoder has started reading from the stream. If a decoder
encounters a header block where the actual largest reference is not equal to the
largest reference declared in the prefix, it MAY treat this as a stream error of
Largest Reference declared in the prefix, it MAY treat this as a stream error of
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I could go either way on this one.... I tend to view it similarly to when -transport capitalizes "[Cc]onnection ID" -- "Largest Reference" is the field itself, while "the largest reference" means the greatest index referenced by the frame.

@martinthomson martinthomson added editorial An issue that does not affect the design of the protocol; does not require consensus. -qpack labels Aug 14, 2018
@afrind afrind merged commit 5df63b4 into quicwg:master Aug 22, 2018
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