Clarify details and organise

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@@ -4,36 +4,22 @@ __What are we reading?__ [Data Feminism by Catherine D'Ignazio and Laura F. Klei
 
 We will be holding weekly meetings over the summer to help us all stay accountable and to discuss
 our thoughts on _Data Feminism_ - a classic data ethics text that many of us have probably had on our
-`to read` lists for a long time. 
+`to read` lists for too long!  
 
-You will need to get yourself a copy of the book. 
-Consider looking in your local library or university library for a copy, or you can order one from your local book shop. 
+Remember you will need to get yourself a copy of the book. 
 If you need help finding a copy then email Nina at nina.dicara@bristol.ac.uk. 
 
 ## Meeting Dates and Times 
 
-__Time__ 
-Every meeting will be held at 15:00 UTC.
-This is to try and get the best coverage across requested timezones which were: UK, Europe, Canada, US and South America.
+### Dates
 
-| Timezone                    | Local Meeting Time |
-|-----------------------------|--------------------|
-| Central European Time UTC+2 | 17:00              |
-| British Summer Time UTC+1   | 16:00              |
-| Eastern Daylight Time UTC-4 | 11:00              |
-| Peru Time UTC-5             | 10:00              |
-| Pacific Daylight Time UTC-7 | 08:00              |
-
-Psst - Please raise an issue if you spot that any of these time conversions are incorrect! 
-
-__Dates__
-
-The best dates for most people were Mondays and Thursday so we will be having two weeks on each. 
+The best dates for most people were Mondays and Thursday so we will be having two weeks on each.  
 The week beginning Monday 6th August there will not be a meeting. 
+All meetings will be at 15:00 UTC - see below for timezone info!  
 
 | Chapter             | Date                   |
 |---------------------|------------------------|
-| Introduction and hi | Monday 8th July        |
+| Introduction and introductions! | Monday 8th July        |
 | Chapter 1           | Monday 15th July       |
 | Chapter 2           | Thursday 26th July     |
 | Chapter 3           | Thursday 2nd August    |
@@ -43,7 +29,24 @@ The week beginning Monday 6th August there will not be a meeting.
 | Chapter 7           | Thursday 5th September |
 | Conclusion          | Monday 9th September   |
 
-## Want to join in? 
+### Time
+
+The meetings will be held at 15:00 UTC across all the dates. 
+This is to try and get the best coverage across requested timezones which were: UK, Europe, Canada, USA and South America.
+
+| Timezone                    | Local Meeting Time |
+|-----------------------------|--------------------|
+| Central European Time UTC+2 | 17:00              |
+| British Summer Time UTC+1   | 16:00              |
+| Eastern Daylight Time UTC-4 | 11:00              |
+| Peru Time UTC-5             | 10:00              |
+| Pacific Daylight Time UTC-7 | 08:00              |
+
+Psst - Please raise an issue if you spot that any of these time conversions are incorrect! 
+
+
+
+## Want to join? 
 
-Email Nina at nina.dicara@bristol.ac.uk if you'd like to go on the email list for meeting reminders over the summer. 
-I can also send you a calendar invite for the events if you like so they're in your online diary.
+We'd love to have you join! Email Nina at nina.dicara@bristol.ac.uk if you'd like to go on the email list for meeting reminders over the summer. 
+We can also send you a calendar invite for the events if you like so they're in your online diary.