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Small typos #295

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riannella opened this Issue Feb 20, 2018 · 0 comments

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riannella commented Feb 20, 2018

Typos found via the Japanese translation:

On Tue, Feb 20, 2018 at 7:45 PM, 上綱秀治 ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp wrote:
Dear Sir and Madam

This is Shuji Kamitsuna@Japan.

"ODRL Information Model 2.2" in Japanese is available now.

http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/internet/rights/REC-odrl-model-20180215.html

Thank you for the great specification!

I found some possible typos below.

Sec. 2.2.1, 2nd. Example Use Case:
"ttp://example.com/odrl:profile:03" must be "http://example.com/odrl:profile:03" - The initial "h" is missing.

Sec. 2.2.2, Example Use Case:
"can my indexed" might be "can be indexed".

Sec. 2.3.1, in the explanation of "assignee":
"the of Rule" might be "of the Rule".

Sec. 2.5.3:
"all of the the" must be "all of the" - "the" is doubled.

Sec. 2.6.4, 2nd. Example Use Case:
"assigner MUST now also compensate" - Could "assigner" be "assinee"?

Best Regards,

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KAMITSUNA, Shuji.
ax2s-kmtn@asahi-net.or.jp
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~ax2s-kmtn/

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