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Explainer Updates #745

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@mmccool mmccool commented May 5, 2022

  • New discovery section content (main contribution as this was missing before)
  • Adding discovery as a building block in the intro
  • Adding hyperlinks in Scripting API section to be consistent with other sections
  • Adding Scripting and Binding Templates as optional/informative building blocks in the summary
  • Changing name "WoT Security and Privacy Considerations" to "WoT Security and Privacy Guidelines"
  • Grammatically treating "Security" and "Privacy" as two different things in certain places
  • And various other small fixes, including getting rid of some extraneous verbiage and breaking up long sentences.

Note this is a blocker for proceeding with horizontal review. Please review and I will attempt to deal with any feedback ASAP so we can reach consensus.

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looks ok for me. Just asking for a small change request.

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Please incorporate the proposed changes.

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@mlagally mlagally merged commit a9aad72 into w3c:main May 12, 2022
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