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DiD S6: update dialogue
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[then]
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "I hoped that I would never see you again, Malin. I see that you are not taking your banishment seriously, so I will make myself clear to you: no matter for what reason you have returned, you are not welcome here. Take one step closer to Parthyn and I will order the guards to attack you."
message= _ "I hoped I’d never see ya again, Malin. You’re obviously not taking yer banishment seriously, so I’ll tell ya one last time — no matter why you’ve come back, we’re not welcomin’ ya here. Take one step closer to Parthyn and I’ll order tha guards to attack ya."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Banishment or not, I am here to help defend the town against the orcs!"
message= _ "Banishment or not, I’m here to help defend my home against the orcs!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "Orcs or not, you must leave!"
message= _ "Orcs or not, ya gots ta leave!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Dela, help me! You, at least, must see reason!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "Ya know there’s no way she’s sidin’ with ya."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "You chose the path of darkness on your own. We will not be dragged into it with you."
message= _ "That... I don’t really..."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "If you continue to be stubborn, we will attack you. It is your choice."
message= _ "See? If ya keep bein’ stubborn, we’ll attack ya. Leave."
[/message]

[message]
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[else]
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "I had not thought to see you again, Malin. But what is this foul creature that stands by your side?"
# po: ’side is short for beside
message= _ "I didn’t think I’d see ya again, Malin. But what’s this awful thing that stands ’side ya?"
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "It does not take a trained mage to realize that by ‘magical arts’, you refer to necromancy! That creature reeks of death!"
message= _ "It don’t take a trained mage ta see that yer ‘magical arts’ refers to necromancy! That creature stinks o’ death!"
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "Better to face the orcish menace alone than to embrace dark magic! I warned you about this before, yet you failed to heed my advice. Your father would turn in his grave if he could see what you’ve become."
# po: the third sentence is "your father would be turning in his grave if he could see what you've become" with intentionally incorrect grammar because Drogan is not well educated
message= _ "Better ta face them orcs alone than ta use dark magic! I warned ya about this before, but obviously ya ignored me. Yer father’d be turnin’ in his grave if he be seein’ what you’ve become."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "How dare you bring my father into this, Drogan! I have fought with every fiber of my being against these foul orcs, and I have done it to protect my country and kinsmen. Is this how you repay me? With scorn and disdain?"
# po: Malin looses his cool and slips into "country talk"
message= _ "Ya dare bring my father into this! I’ve fought with every fiber of my being against these orcs, and I’ve done it all ta protect my country and kinsmen. Is this how ye repay me? With scorn and disdain?"
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "A fine tale. I find it more likely that you brought your orcish allies here with you to take your revenge upon the city. If we stand down, your undead will no doubt kill us where we stand. Watching you grow up, I never could have believed you would turn into such a traitor."
# po: ’n means and
message= _ "Fine story ye be tellin’ me. I find it likelier that ya brought yer pet orcs here ta help ya take revenge on us. If I let ya through, yer undead will kill us where we stand ’n sack the whole city. Watchin’ ya grow up, I never could’ve thought you’d turn into such a traitor."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Dela, you do not believe that, do you?"
message= _ "And what of the rest of you? Dela, at least you don’t believe that, do you?"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "I..."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "Stop looking to your sister, Malin. The fact that even she rebuffs you so should tell you how much of a traitor you are."
message= _ "Stop lookin’ ta her, Malin. Tha fact that even Dela be rejectin’ ya should tell ya how much o’ a traitor ye are."
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "You are the traitor, Drogan, for preventing me from protecting Parthyn. I will defend my home no matter the cost, even if it means I must cut you down first."
# po: Malin looses his cool and slips into country talk again
message= _ "You’re the traitor, Drogan! This be twice now that you’ve tried ta prevent me from protecting Parthyn. I’ll defend my home no matter the cost, even if it means I must cut ya down first."
[/message]

# Malin cools down briefly
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "<i>If I want the people of Parthyn to accept me back, I must be cautious. I must not kill any of them besides Drogan or they will surely oust me for good.</i>"
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# In-scenario Events

[event]
name=recruit,recall
[filter]
side=1
type=Dark Adept DiD,Dark Sorcerer DiD,Necromancer
[/filter]

[if]
{DID_RTP_HAS_DROGAN}
[then]
[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "So, Malin, you have even begun to corrupt our people with your sorcerous ways. Even I did not expect you to stoop low enough to kidnap the villagers and make them into your pawns!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "I joined Malin of my own free will! You fools simply do not understand the power that necromancy holds."
female_message= _ "female^I joined Malin of my own free will! You fools simply do not understand the power that necromancy holds."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "I understand it well enough to know that it makes all who embrace it evil."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "There is no point in arguing with one so obstinate. We can only show Drogan the error of his ways through force."
[/message]
[/then]
[else]
[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Malin! First you abandon us to the orcs on your mad quest for necromancy, then you heartlessly murder Drogan, and now... now you even kidnap the villagers and corrupt them with your sorcery! How low have you fallen?"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "I joined Malin of my own free will! The orcs would have overrun you if not for Malin’s powers!"
female_message= _ "female^I joined Malin of my own free will! The orcs would have overrun you if not for Malin’s powers!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "You necromancers defile the bodies of the dead and slaughter the innocent for your sick perversions. Do you not see the depravity that you have become, Malin?"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "..."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "No quip about how we do not understand you? No comment about your moral superiority? Nothing to say at all? I can only hope you are so quiet when I kill you."
[/message]
[/else]
[/if]
[/event]

[event]
name=moveto
[filter]
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[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "At least you have not completely lost your humanity by allying yourself with the orcs. But you cannot return to Parthyn, Malin. No necromancer will ever be welcome here."
message= _ "I see that you’ve not lost all o’ yer humanity by allying yerself with tha orcs. But ya can’t come back, Malin. No necromancer will ever be welcome in Parthyn."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "What?! You ungrateful cur! You would sack the city and let all of our people die, and for what? Only to spurn something you do not understand? You are a fool. Parthyn will only be under greater danger with you leading it. If the town is to survive, <i>you</i> are the one who must leave!"
message= _ "What?! You ungrateful cur! You’d sack tha city and let everyone die, and fer what? Only ta spurn something you don’t understand? You’re a fool. Parthyn will only be under greater danger with you leadin’ it. If we’re to survive, <i>you</i> are the one who must leave!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Have you lost your mind, Malin? There’s no way we’re going to banish Drogan!"
message= _ "Have you lost yer mind, Malin? There’s no way we’re banishin’ Drogan!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Drogan
message= _ "Malin, in truth, I do not want to fight you as one of my former friends. Leave Parthyn. I will not ask you again."
message= _ "Malin, ye were once one o’ my friends and tha pride o’ tha town. I truly don’t want ta fight ya. I’ll give ya one more chance. Leave Parthyn."
[/message]

[message]
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[else]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "See how you die when you spurn the help of Malin Keshar!"
message= _ "See how you die when you spurn the help of Malin Keshar..."
[/message]
[/else]
[/if]
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[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Drogan, no! Malin, you monster, how could you just murder Drogan in cold blood?"
message= _ "Drogan, no! Malin, you monster, how could ya just murder Drogan in cold blood?"
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "How could you possibly think Drogan was the traitor when you are the one attacking Parthyn?"
message= _ "How could ye possibly think Drogan was tha traitor when you’re the one attacking Parthyn?"
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "There is no reason to be had with someone who embraces evil so shamelessly! You will pay for Drogan’s death!"
message= _ "I tried to! I wanted ta believe in ya, I really did. After Father died, you and Drogan were all I had..."
[/message]

[if]
{DID_RTP_HAS_ORC_LEADER}
[then]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Even with my new powers, I cannot fight the entire town as well as the orcs. I must flee to the west to find Darken Volk!"
[/message]
[/then]
[else]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Even with my new powers, I cannot fight the entire town on my own. I must flee to the west to find Darken Volk!"
[/message]
[/else]
[/if]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "Then why did ya listen to him instead of me? I was tryin’ to keep us together. He was tryin’ to tear us apart! You wouldn’t even lift a finger ta help me when he threatened ta attack me!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Malin, that’s—"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "You’ve always been like this. You never think fer yerself. It’s always just what other people tell ya. Not a single original thought in yer head."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Malin—"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "That man used necromancy? He must be evil! Never mind that he be yer own brother, trying to protect his own home!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Enough! There’s nothing I can say ta someone who embraces evil so shamelessly! You’ll pay for Drogan’s death!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "..."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "<i>So, no matter what, she’ll be against me? Then this is hopeless. Even if they intend to fight me, I’ve no wish to fight the townsfolk...</i>"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "<i>I guess I should just leave and find Darken Volk.</i>"
[/message]

{HIGHLIGHT_IMAGE 16 1 scenery/signpost.png ()}

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[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "As ugly in death as he was in life. This is proof that Drogan was evil!"
message= _ "As ugly in death as he was in life. Darken Volk was right. It <i>is</i> fitting."
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "What have you done?! Killing Drogan was not enough — you had to defile his body as well? How could you turn him into such a... a twisted, abominable thing? I cannot believe how depraved you have become!"
message= _ "What have you done?! Killing Drogan wasn’t enough — ya had ta defile his body as well? How could ya turn him into such a... a hideous thing? I can’t believe how depraved you’ve become!"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "What you see on the outside reflects the inside. It is an ugly truth, but it is not my fault if you cannot accept it!"
message= _ "What you see on the outside reflects the inside. The face of truth is undoubtedly an ugly one."
[/message]
[/event]
[/event]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Malin Keshar
message= _ "More orcs, and powerful ones at that! Alas, it will be impossible for me to outrun their riders..."
message= _ "More orcs, and powerful ones at that! There’s no way I’m escaping now..."
[/message]
[/event]

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[then]
[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Flee while you still can, Malin the Damned! When I have defeated these orcs and secured Parthyn against further raids, you can be sure that I will hunt you down. You are my brother no longer."
message= _ "Flee while you still can, Malin the Damned! When I have defeated these orcs and secured Parthyn against further raids, I will hunt you down and I will kill you. You are my brother no longer."
[/message]
[/then]
[else]
[message]
speaker=Dela Keshar
message= _ "Flee while you still can, Malin the Damned! When I have secured Parthyn against further raids, you can be sure that I will hunt you down. You are my brother no longer."
message= _ "Flee while you still can, Malin the Damned! When I have secured Parthyn against further raids, I will hunt you down and I will kill you. You are my brother no longer."
[/message]
[/else]
[/if]
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