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Liberty: touchup dialogue
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44 changes: 21 additions & 23 deletions data/campaigns/Liberty/scenarios/01_The_Raid.cfg
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[story]
[part]
#po: Baldras is an old man from the country and both speaks and writes with many grammatical errors due to his relative lack of education
#po: He is also a little bit rude and grumpy, so languages with ruder or more informal variants of words should use those in most cases
#po: He is also a little bit rude and grumpy, so languages with ruder or more informal variants of words should use those where appropriate
story= _ "From the journal of Baldras, 21 Scatterseed, 501 YW
Months... seven months it’s been since the Crown did send a single guard here to help us. This Garard II be a pompous stinker, worser than his father! Us of these border towns Delwyn and Dallben be already poor and needy, yet alls ‘His Majesty’ can thinks of is tax, tax, tax, making us pay even if we don’t technically be part of Wesnoth. And then he uses our gold to provoke more wars with more orcs and for what? Not care for peoples like us, no. Only getting more land for them grubby nobles to lord over more."
Months... seven months it’s been since the Crown did send a single guard here to help us. This Garard II be a pompous stinker, worser than his father! Us of these border towns Delwyn and Dallben be already poor and needy, yet alls ‘His Majesty’ can thinks of is tax, tax, tax, making us pay even if we don’t technically be part of Wesnoth. And then he uses our gold to provoke more wars with more orcs and for what? Not care for peoples like us, no. Only getting more land for them grubby nobles to lord over."
background=story/frontier.jpg
[/part]
[part]
story= _ "To abbadon with the Crown! We gots no armies and we don’t even got real weapons, but we of the Western Marches use our slings and clubs good enough. In all Annuvin Province, there won’t be nobody besting us in these forests and swamps. We’re self-reliant out here. We gots our own trade routes and pacts of mutual defense. No need for them Wesnothians. Not a single bit."
story= _ "To abbadon with the Crown! We gots no armies and we don’t even got real weapons, but we of the Western Marches sure knows how to use our slings and clubs. In all Annuvin Province, there won’t be nobody besting us in these forests and swamps. We’re self-reliant out here. We gots our own trade routes and pacts of mutual defense. No need for them Wesnothians. Not a single bit."
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[/part]
[part]
#po: Some languages, including Norwegian and Old English, don't
#po: have a single word for "uncle", dividing it into
#po: mother's-brother vs. father's-brother. Baldras is
#po: Harper's mother's brother. In some human societies,
#po: including the Navaho and Akan, this would give him a
#po: special responsibility for the boy.
#po: Some languages, including Norwegian and Old English, don't have a single word for "uncle", dividing it into
#po: mother's-brother vs. father's-brother. Baldras is Harper's mother's brother.
#po: In some human societies, including the Navaho and Akan, this would give him a special responsibility for the boy.
#po: Erwen is Baldras' younger sister, so languages with a special word for that should use it
story= _ "Sun was out today, but it was raining too. Weird mix of brightness and woe. Reminds me of that day Harper’s pa died in that orc raid. Since my sister Erwen died when he was young, poor lad had nobody left but me. Never wanted no kid of my own but... well, he’s mine to take care of now. Fine lad, that one, just a bit careless like his pa. I’ll needs to keep a good eye on him now, with all them orcs running round here of late."
story= _ "Sun were out today, but it were raining too. Weird mix of brightness and woe. Reminds me of the day Harper’s pa died in that orc raid. Since my sister Erwen died when he was young, poor lad had nobody left but me. Never wanted no kid of my own but... well, he’s mine to take care of now. Fine lad, that one, just a bit careless like his pa. I’ll needs to keep a good eye on him now, with all them orcs running round here of late."
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[/part]
[/story]
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[message]
speaker=Fal Khag
message= _ "I long to burn human cities, but that weasley witch thinks we’re only good enough for these puny villages. Hapless clods have barely anything for us to take, but ‘least the witch’s gold is good."
message= _ "I long to burn human cities, but that weasley witch thinks we’re only good enough for these puny villages. Hapless clods have barely anything for us to raid, but at least the witch’s gold is good."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Fal Khag
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[message]
speaker=Red
message= _ "Look, goblin riders approach! You were right, they were going to raid Dallben while we were gone."
# po: Other country folk also have accents
message= _ "Look, goblin riders approach! You was right, they was going to raid Dallben while we was gone."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "We’ve gots to stop them or they’ll burn the whole village. Damn these goblins and damn the Crown. We always be havin’ to fight fer ourselves."
message= _ "We’ve gots to stop them or they’ll burn down the whole village. Damn these goblins and damn the Crown. We always be havin’ to fight fer ourselves."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Harper
# po: Harper has a bit of an accent, but not as much as his Uncle.
# po: Harper is a bit of a reckless kid as Baldras alludes to, but he's much more polite
# po: Harper has a bit of an accent, but not as much as Baldras.
# po: He's a bit of a reckless kid as Baldras alludes to, but he's much more polite
message= _ "Uncle, we got no time to talk! Them riders are heading full-speed straight for Dallben. We’ll need to chase them down through those woods — and fast, or we won’t be able to catch up."
[/message]
[message]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Harper
message= _ "I know, I know, no need to worry so much, Uncle. All right now, let’s stop these riders!"
message= _ "I know, I know, no need to worry so much, Uncle. All right, let’s stop these riders!"
[/message]
[/event]

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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "The King stopped sendin’ patrols out here a while back. Stinker probably started another war or something. Don’t really matter. Technically Annuvin be under the charge of Elensefar, but you don’t see ‘em coming to help us either."
message= _ "The King stopped sendin’ patrols out here a while back. Stinker probably sent his troops on some stupid new war or something. Don’t really matter. Technically, Annuvin be under the charge of Elensefar, but you don’t see ‘em coming to help us either."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Harper
message= _ "Then why do we got to pay taxes to the King? Maybe Elensefar doesn’t help us, but least they don’t take our gold."
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "I don’t know, Harper. I just don’t know. All I can say is we’re on our own out here."
message= _ "I don’t know, Harper. I just don’t know. Alls I can say is we’re on our own out here."
[/message]

[endlevel]
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[message]
speaker=Harper
message= _ "Hey, someone left their pack here. I could use it to carry some more rocks."
message= _ "Hey, someone left their pack here. I could uses it to carry some more rocks."
[/message]

[sound]
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[then]
[message]
speaker=Wolmas
message= _ "What’s happening here? Why are you running like mad, $unit.name|?"
message= _ "What’s happening here? Why be you running like mad, $unit.name|?"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=unit
message= _ "Goblin riders on the hunt, headed right for the village. We must stop them!"
message= _ "Goblin riders be on the hunt, headed right for Dallben. We gots to stop them!"
[/message]
[/then]

[else]
[message]
speaker=Wolmas
message= _ "Look! Goblin riders on the hunt, heading right for Dallben!"
message= _ "Look! Goblin riders be on the hunt, heading right for Dallben!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Remald
message= _ "We’ve got to stop them!"
message= _ "We’ve gots to stop them!"
[/message]
[/else]
)}
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18 changes: 9 additions & 9 deletions data/campaigns/Liberty/scenarios/02_Civil_Disobedience.cfg
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{TURNS 14 13 12}
{DEFAULT_SCHEDULE_AFTERNOON}

{SCENARIO_MUSIC "loyalists.ogg"}
{INTRO_AND_SCENARIO_MUSIC "revelation.ogg" "loyalists.ogg"}
{EXTRA_SCENARIO_MUSIC "battle.ogg"}
{EXTRA_SCENARIO_MUSIC "siege_of_laurelmor.ogg"}

[story]
[part]
story= _ "Baldras’ journal, 6 Deeproot, 501 YW:
Me and Harper visited Erwen’s grave today. I helped the lad pick her a bunch of flowers. He don’t remember her much, but he still thinks lot abouts her. She were his ma after all. Harper definitely be reminding me of her, real bright and brassy personality. Too bad he don’t got her sense or wits, but here’s to hoping he be learning more with time."
Me and Harper visited Erwen’s grave today. I helped the lad pick her a bunch of flowers — we even founds a couple of them blue lilies, her favorite ones. Harper don’t remember her much, but he still thinks a lot abouts her. Lad reminds me so much of his ma, real bright and brassy personality, even if he don’t got her sense or wits. But, well, here’s to hoping he be learning more with time."
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[/part]
[part]
story= _ "Speaking of sense, I gots me a bad feeling in my gut about today. Feels like something’s abouts to happen, even if them scouts haven’t reported any orcs nearby. Just in case, I’d better ready our hunting troop when I gets back to the village..."
story= _ "Speaking of sense, I gots me a bad feeling in my gut about today. Just feels like something’s abouts to happen, even if them scouts haven’t reported any troubles yet. I’d better ready our hunting troop when I gets back to the village, just in case..."
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[/part]
[/story]
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "<i>Since a few years back, but weren’t never her giving out no orders...</i>"
message= _ "<i>Since a few years back, I thinks, but weren’t never her giving out no orders...</i>"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
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[/message]
[message]
speaker=Harper
message= _ "We’re in this together. Death to the Wesnothians!"
message= _ "We be in this together. Death to the Wesnothians!"
[/message]
[message]
speaker=Baldras
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[message]
speaker=Harper
message= _ "They just killed an innocent man! Those murderers!"
message= _ "They just killed an innocent man! Murderers!"
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
role=Advisor
message= _ "We beat their leader, but a couple of their riders escaped. What should we do?"
message= _ "We beated their leader, but a couple of them riders escaped. What shoulds we do?"
[/message]

[message]
speaker=Baldras
message= _ "Somethin’ be very wrong here. That Garard weren’t never no hero or nuthin, but least his men never would’ve attacked us. The Queen must’ve did something to him. Her men be nothing more than thugs."
message= _ "Somethin’ be very wrong here. That Garard weren’t never no hero or nothing, but least his men never would’ve attacked us. The Queen must’ve did something to him. Her men be nothing more than thugs."
[/message]

[message]
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[message]
role=Advisor
message= _ "That’s true. Whenever there has been trouble, we’ve always flown to their aid and they to ours. We should face this together."
message= _ "That’s true. Whenever there’s been troubles, we’ve always been the ones to be helping each other."
[/message]

[message]
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