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Bring disconnected landing page in line with new site content #8565

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Changes proposed in this Pull Request:

  • Content changes to disconnected landing page

Testing instructions:

  • Should look like this:

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@richardmuscat richardmuscat added this to the 5.8 milestone Jan 19, 2018
@richardmuscat richardmuscat requested a review from a team as a code owner January 19, 2018 09:52
@jeherve jeherve added [Type] Enhancement Changes to an existing feature — removing, adding, or changing parts of it [Status] Needs Review To request a review from Crew. Label will be renamed soon. Admin Page React-powered dashboard under the Jetpack menu labels Jan 19, 2018
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LGTM!

@zinigor zinigor added [Status] Ready to Merge Go ahead, you can push that green button! and removed [Status] Needs Review To request a review from Crew. Label will be renamed soon. labels Jan 25, 2018
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A few comments about i18n and wording


<div className="jp-jetpack-connect__feature-list">
<div className="jp-jetpack-connect__feature-list-column">
<h3 title="Jetpack's WordPress themes" className="dops-section-header__label">
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Shouldn't we make those titles translatable as well?

</p>
</div>
</div>
<div className="jp-jetpack-connect__feature-list-column">
<h3 title="Jetpack's Sharing and Like features" className="dops-section-header__label">
{ __( 'Sharing & Like Buttons' ) }
<h3 title="Jetpack's publicize features" className="dops-section-header__label">
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Should we capitalize Publicize?

</h2>
<p className="jp-jetpack-connect__description">
{ __(
'Jetpack blocks malicious log in attempts, lets you know if your site goes down, ' +
'and can automatically update your plugins, so you don’t have to worry.'
'Automatic defense against hacks, malware, spam, data loss, and downtime.'
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Should it be "defends" here?

) }
</p>
</header>

<div className="jp-jetpack-connect__interior-container">
<div className="jp-jetpack-connect__feature-list">
<div className="jp-jetpack-connect__feature-list-column">
<h3 title="Jetpack's Protect feature" className="dops-section-header__label">
{ __( 'Protect', { context: 'Header. Noun: Protect is a module of Jetpack.' } ) }
<h3 title="Jetpack's monitor feature" className="dops-section-header__label">
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Should we capitalize Monitor here?

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@richardmuscat looks good for a quick fix. BUT I think we should put on our list to update this page to reflect the design of the new jetpack.com homepage—or something a little more simple than the product tour page.

01 welcome to jetpack - plugins splash

Here's a mock that @joanrho did for the full screen connection prompt on the /plugins/ page. Would be great to have something similar. cc @rickybanister

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Just to add to what @jeffgolenski said, we would implement the same content for the disconnected landing page as we would for the plugins splash page. Same code, same content. Less to maintain.

@johnHackworth's team may be able to work on that for the next release.

I think it's fine to merge this PR for the next release, but it may be updated for the next one.

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zinigor commented Jan 26, 2018

@jeherve I have addressed your comments, can you please take a look again?

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Looking good now. Merging this.

@jeherve jeherve merged commit c51a446 into master Jan 29, 2018
@jeherve jeherve deleted the update/disconnected-landing-page branch January 29, 2018 10:08
@jeherve jeherve added [Status] Has Changelog and removed [Status] Ready to Merge Go ahead, you can push that green button! [Status] Needs Changelog labels Jan 29, 2018
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zinigor pushed a commit that referenced this pull request Jan 30, 2018
* Changelog 5.8: create base for changelog.

* Update 5.8 release post link

* fix 5.8 release date

* Updates to plugin description

* Changelog: add #8499

* Changelog: add #8506

* Changelog: add #8509

* Changelog: add #8516

* Changelog: add #8517

* Changelog: add #8523

* Changelog: add #8547

* Changelog: add #8496

* Changelog: add #8584

* Changelog: add #8595

* Changelog: add #8445

* Changelog: add #8431

* Changelog: add #8284

* Changelog: add #8270

* Changelog: add #8124

* Changelog: add #8581

* Changelog: add #8463

* Changelog: add #8568 (#8646)

* Updates to testing list and changelog

* Changelog: add #8443

* Changelog: add #8459

* Changelog: add #8469

* Changelog: add #8464

* Changelog: add #8478 and #8479

* Changelog: add #8483

* Changelog: add #8488

* Changelog: add #8513

* Changelog: add #8555

* Changelog: add #8565

* Changelog: add #8601

* Changelog: add #8612

* Changelog: add first pass at Search items.

* Changelog: add more info to help test Search.

* Changelog: add #8144

* Changelog: add #8313

* Changelog: add #8419

* Changelog: add #8465

* Changelog: add #8515

* Changelog: add #8587

* Changelog: add #8591

* Changelog: add #8659

* Changelog: add #8661

* Changelog: add #8671

* Changelog: add 5.7.1 to archived changelog too.

* Reverted changes to readme, removed entry about backups.
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