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# AlienInvasion
Hi!
I'm Ella, a girl who is 12 years old. You can also call me "九亿（jiuyi）".
I come from China and my English is not very well. So if I have some Grammar error...Tell me please! I want to practice my English!
I come from China and my English is not very good(well是副词). So if I have some grammar mistakes(grammar不应大写，错误应用mistakes更为恰当)...Tell me please! I want to practice my English!
I am a busy girl because I will go to middle school soon, so I don't have enough time to update my code and this web... Thanks for your understanding!

This item is my first item--AlienInvasion!
I read 《Python Crash Course》 and found it, it's a funny game that made by Pygame (a module in Python).
It include 6 big part (class):
This item is my first program(两个item重复)--AlienInvasion!
I read *Python Crash Course*(英文没有书名号，得用斜体代替) and found it, it's a funny game that made by Pygame (a module in Python).
It include 6 big parts (classes)(6个……应该用复数形式……好吧，你的英语堪忧……):
1.Main code
2.Settings (save all the attribute)
2.Settings (save all the attributions)(在这个语境下，attributions比attribute更好)
3.Ship
4.Alien
5.Bullet
6.Action (shooting, Delete the aliens from the screen and so on~)
6.Action (shooting, delete(delete大写干嘛……) the aliens from the screen, etc.)(etc.即法文的et cetera，比and so on更正式)
In each big part,it all has some small part, I won't elaborate here.

As a student,I'm very busy now, so I don't know when this web can be update...
You can contact me in this following ways:
As a student, (没有空格，强迫症当场去世了)I'm very busy now, so I don't know when this program(web？网络？什么时候网络能升级？什么鬼？我给你改成了program) can be update...
You can contact me in the(the following ways!!!什么是this following ways嘛！this是单数，ways是复数……) following ways:

E-mail: ella1102@xiaocao.onmicrosoft.com

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