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docs: followup amends for 4.0 release #3431

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/cc @wardbell

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I added some tiny nitpicking things that you might fix before merging. Feel free to merge when ready.

@@ -353,7 +354,7 @@ figure
+makeExample('animations/ts/src/app/hero-list-multistep.component.ts', 'template', 'hero-list-multistep.component.ts (excerpt)')(format=".")

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The callbacks receive an `AnimationTransitionEvent` which contains useful properties such as `fromState`,
The callbacks receive an `AnimationEvent` which contains useful properties such as `fromState`,
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Should be that contains but that is a grammar nit.

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Done.

@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ block dart-map-alternative
An `Injector` is itself an injectable service.

In this example, Angular injects the component's own `Injector` into the component's constructor.
The component then asks the injected injector for the services it wants.
The component then asks the injected injector for the services it wants on `ngOnInit`.
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OK but better would be "in ngOnInit(). Use "in" instead of "on"

Kapunahele has started highlighting method names by putting parens after them. I think it's a good idea. We'll have a lot of prose to fix if we follow her lead. We can start any time :)

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Done

@filipesilva filipesilva force-pushed the prose-changes-for-4.0 branch from c42b00f to 5ed6a5a Compare March 24, 2017 17:58
@filipesilva filipesilva merged commit 1503691 into angular:master Mar 24, 2017
@filipesilva filipesilva deleted the prose-changes-for-4.0 branch March 24, 2017 17:58
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