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…neo4j#2490) Since we moved them over from DBMS level (while still keeping the DBMS level syntax, just as another syntax for `DATABASE *`) --------- Co-authored-by: Mark Dixon <1756429+mnd999@users.noreply.github.com> Co-authored-by: Reneta Popova <reneta.popova@neo4j.com>
The Operations manual covers all releases of 2025.xx series. That's why we cannot simply replace examples with new ones, as new functionality has been added. We also need to retain examples for earlier versions of Neo4j.
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Thank you, @lidiazuin. They all look good from a visual perspective but I've found some inconsistencies and things that might lead to misunderstandings.
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#2541 (comment) I also noticed this :P
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The connections that you noted that don't derive from the same place are all coming from ALL DBMS PRIVILEGES, that's the style of the arrows used in the technical diagrams. I can try to change the style, but just letting you know that this is the default styling.
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I thought so, but they look misleading, so I decided to tell you if you can change them somehow.
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Co-authored-by: Reneta Popova <reneta.popova@neo4j.com>
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Review of current state
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Next round of comments, a lot of them on missing/to much bold :P
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Looking at most of the updates (skipping the file that now seems duplicated as I don't want to review both and I don't know which is the latest, this also means that all open comments on that file is left as is until I can tick them off)
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small general nitpick I noticed as I compare with the old ones:
in the *|x[, ...]
groups we previously only had the x
part italic and not the *
(or ()
or other such syntax characters).
Examples (both from this and other images):
- (*|user[, ...])
- *|name[, ...]
- TO role[, ...]
- {*|property[, ...]}
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Next round of review, still some older comments left as well
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DATABASE[S]
should not be bold
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It is not bold.
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re-review
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I think the old comments I had left now are minor things, but noticed one more thing as I looked through the updates
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This PR includes documentation updates Updated pages: |
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Only minor things left that I'm less picky about
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LGTM! Awesome! I don't find any typos on the diagrams.
Only one quick question: the vertical diagram Syntax of GRANT
and DENY
DBMS privileges actually becomes smaller if you click on it. Is this expected?
All other diagrams are horizontal and they appear larger and closer if you click on them. Only this vertical diagram behaves differently.
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