chore: two grammar changes in profile readme #22
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Hello! I wanted to propose two small grammar changes that I hope will refine the
nodejs
GitHub organization's profile readme.1. Remove Unnecessary Em Dash
The current readme has an em dash in the middle of its opening sentence:
Em dash usage is subjective, but I don't think it belongs here. Em dashes are generally best for moving sentences in a new direction, like a "more powerful" parenthetical.
In my view, the current sentence in the profile readme does not need a separator of any kind. It's not expressing two ideas. It's one singular, coherent explanation of Node.js, and I think it works better as a single clause:
2. Fix Typo in Code of Conduct Section
The readme's section about the Code of Conduct currently has a typo (emphasis mine):
There are several ways this could be fixed. I've proposed the following in this PR:
This is a small change, and in my view maintains a good consistency across the main verb of each header:
But there are other ways this could be fixed. Alternative ideas include: