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Create technical-vision.md #47
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See related issue #40
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some comments..
I’d use an Oxford comma and change:
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One thing that’s not so obvious is that we need to get development tools & libraries modified so that they’re secure by default (the “obvious/default thing to do” is also the secure thing to do). I’d like to think that’s obliquely covered by the phrase "with security handled proactively and as a matter of course”. But maybe that’s not clear enough. We could emphasize that by adding a bullet after the first one, something like this:
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* Removed the words 'products and services' from first sentence and used the general term 'software' * Added a clause for 'by default' in the first sentence to capture this important principle. * Added a colon to the end of the first sentence to show that the following bullets are a continuation of the vision statement (not a description of current status).
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+1 from me.
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LGTM
See related issue #40