Restructure short header section #4407
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Update: I think we might want to make corresponding changes to the TLS draft.
Re TLS draft, I think we can replace all the occurrences of "short header packet(s)", "packet(s) with (a) short header" in the TLS draft with "1-RTT packet(s)", as well making necessary changes to table 1.
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Fixes #4397.
This PR restructures 17.3 to be aligned with 17.2. Note that while the diff seems to show whole paragraphs changed in the
Spin Bitsection, all I've done is replaceda packet with a short headerwitha 1-RTT packet.Note that I've not replaced all uses of
short header. I've retained it where it is used alongsidelong header, for symmetry.This still touches more text than I had hoped, but it makes the structure of Section 17 clearer.