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This was a request from the Security and Legal teams - no ticket available as it was communicated through email. Will share with respective teams for review before merging. No urgency here but please feel free to do a review in the meantime, Laura!

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I mostly don't touch legalese unless I have to. :) One edit which was originally to catch a typo, but it could use a touch of clarification. Aside from that, generally bullet points that are entire sentences should have a period at the end of them.

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Possible launch Tuesday Sept 8.

5. Publish documentation.
6. Submit your App for review.
7. Launch into _Public Beta_!
2. Review Segment's security guidance.

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Hey @misteryeo - a tweak here might amp their responsibility as developers; consider changing "Review Segment's Security Guidance" to "Follow Segment's Security Guidance." That way, it more actively gets them doing what we want, as it goes beyond reading and head nodding. Well, only if it works. :)

Andy and others added 3 commits September 8, 2020 17:18
@misteryeo misteryeo merged commit 304b3af into master Sep 9, 2020
@misteryeo misteryeo deleted the security-update branch September 9, 2020 00:36
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