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Edit #2 (rejected 1st commit) light and incremental added needed articles added commas where appropriate, needed. fixed wording that made a verb mean something else. changed wording to remove future tense from text where appropriate. i didnt understand the future tense. to me, its was unnecessarily complex wording, wordy, and didnt match the other text in the present tense. suddenly text starts to read "clicking here..." now text is reading "When you Click" "when toggled"
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Edit #2 (rejected 1st commit) light and incremental
added needed articles
added commas where appropriate, needed.
fixed wording that made a verb mean something else.
changed wording to remove future tense from text where appropriate. i didnt understand the future tense. to me, its was unnecessarily complex wording, wordy, and didnt match the other text in the present tense.
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suddenly text starts to read "clicking here..."
now text is reading "When you Click" "when toggled"