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Probably very subjective, but...perhaps this introduction makes the intention slightly clearer?
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"with the ability" -> "the ability"
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"provide with" seems more appropriate in this case (see http://www.oxforddictionaries.com/definition/english/provide example "A submarine fleet is still essential in providing Canada with the necessary means to defend the world's longest coastline"). but perhaps this is a en-gb vs en-us thing?
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Thanks for the contribution. Let's not debate non-normative style.
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Probably very subjective, but...perhaps this introduction makes the
intention slightly clearer?