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Introduction text + concept illustration #206

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sebastiankb opened this issue Jun 22, 2016 · 2 comments
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Introduction text + concept illustration #206

sebastiankb opened this issue Jun 22, 2016 · 2 comments

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@sebastiankb
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The introduction text and the concept illustration figure do not reqlly harmomize. E.g., the figure uses words such as "servient" (=service and/or client), "Integration Hubs", "Resource models", etc. which is not used in the text. Some more explaination would be good.

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It is actually in the text directly following the figure. Moving it up might already help.
However, I agree that we might need editorial polishing, since the document hasn't been reviewed as a whole for a while now (only patchworks) :)

mkovatsc pushed a commit that referenced this issue Jul 25, 2016
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Avoided mentioning of servient completely.
Reduced redundancy and put more focus on portable application logic.

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