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  • Remove+redirect framework/deployment docs
  • Minor grammar+style updates
  • Fix layout (remove stray spaces, fix tables, etc.)

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mairaw commented Apr 27, 2017

We also need an entry from the main TOC to the Installation Guide.

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This looks great! left a few comments in addition to the main TOC request I made earlier.

## Unsupported Windows versions

- [Windows XP](on-windows-xp.md)
- [Windows XP](on-windows-xp.md)
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Since now this is the main entrance to installation, it also needs to be changed to point to the for developers guide. I'd also remove the intro and the first sub-header, since they don't seem to add much value.

## [Running .NET Framework 1.1 Apps on Windows 8, Windows 8.1, or Windows 10](run-net-framework-1-1-apps.md)
## [Install the .NET Framework 3.5 on Windows 10, Windows 8.1, and Windows 8](dotnet-35-windows-10.md)
## [Troubleshooting the installation of the .NET Framework 3.5 on Windows 8, Windows 8.1, and Windows 10](net-framework-3-5-on-windows-8-plus.md)
## [Installing the .NET Framework](guide-for-developers.md)
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remove ing from the titles (general comment, not just here). In this particular case, the title should be changed to something different since the index.md file is now the Installing the .NET Framework topic

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@mairaw Rename Installing the .NET Framework (guide-for-developers.md) 👉 Install the .NET Framework for developers?

## [Install the .NET Framework 3.5 on Windows 10, Windows 8.1, and Windows 8](dotnet-35-windows-10.md)
## [Troubleshooting the installation of the .NET Framework 3.5 on Windows 8, Windows 8.1, and Windows 10](net-framework-3-5-on-windows-8-plus.md)
## [Installing the .NET Framework](guide-for-developers.md)
## [Installing the .NET Framework on Windows 10](on-windows-10.md)
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I'd move these topics to the top of the TOC

## [Installing the .NET Framework 3.5 on Windows 8 and later versions](net-framework-3-5-on-windows-8-plus.md)
## [Running .NET Framework 1.1 Apps on Windows 8 and later versions](run-net-framework-1-1-apps.md)
## [Troubleshooting](troubleshoot-blocked-installations-and-uninstallations.md)
## [Running .NET Framework 1.1 Apps on Windows 8, Windows 8.1, or Windows 10](run-net-framework-1-1-apps.md)
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should be the last entry

## [Troubleshooting](troubleshoot-blocked-installations-and-uninstallations.md)
## [Running .NET Framework 1.1 Apps on Windows 8, Windows 8.1, or Windows 10](run-net-framework-1-1-apps.md)
## [Install the .NET Framework 3.5 on Windows 10, Windows 8.1, and Windows 8](dotnet-35-windows-10.md)
## [Troubleshooting the installation of the .NET Framework 3.5 on Windows 8, Windows 8.1, and Windows 10](net-framework-3-5-on-windows-8-plus.md)
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make it a child of install

tocHref: /dotnet/articles/framework/deployment/
topicHref: /dotnet/articles/framework/deployment/index
items:
- name: Installing the .NET Framework on Windows
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on the same entry for the install folder, we should change this to Installation Guide


# Troubleshooting the installation of the .NET Framework 3.5 on Windows 8, Windows 8.1, and Windows 10

During installation you may encounter error 0x800f0906, 0x800f0907, or 0x800f081f, in which case refer to [.NET Framework 3.5 installation error: 0x800f0906, 0x800f0907, or 0x800f081f](https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/kb/2734782). Note that these are possibly resolved by installing [security update 3005628](https://support.microsoft.com/kb/3005628).
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the link to the kb article 2734782 is not what i expected. i think we need to link to https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/help/2734782/.net-framework-3.5-installation-error-0x800f0906,-0x800f081f,-0x800f0907.


During installation you may encounter error 0x800f0906, 0x800f0907, or 0x800f081f, in which case refer to [.NET Framework 3.5 installation error: 0x800f0906, 0x800f0907, or 0x800f081f](https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/kb/2734782). Note that these are possibly resolved by installing [security update 3005628](https://support.microsoft.com/kb/3005628).

If the installation fails or you don't have an Internet connection, it's necessary to use your Windows installation media. For details, see Method 3 for error 0x800f0906 in the [.NET Framework 3.5 installation error article](https://support.microsoft.com/en-us/kb/2734782). If you don't have installation media, see [Create Installation media for Windows 8.1](http://windows.microsoft.com/en-US/windows-8/create-reset-refresh-media?woldogcb=0).
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same here for kb article.

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@mairaw The last set of changes is extensive in attempting to realign link titles with changed doc names (e.g., dropping "-ing" and changing "Installation Guide" where it pointed to the guide for developers). I've temporarily used the title Install the .NET Framework for developers for the guide-for-developers.md doc until you let me know what you'd like to call that one.

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There also needs to be an entry for the Installation Guide from the main TOC under framework.

|[.NET Core and Open-Source](../../../docs/framework/get-started/net-core-and-open-source.md)|Describes what .NET Core is in relation to the .NET Framework and how to access the open-source .NET Core projects.|
|[.NET Core documentation](https://docs.microsoft.com/dotnet/)|The conceptual and API reference documentation for .NET Core.|
|[Installation Guide](../../../docs/framework/install/guide-for-developers.md)|Provides information about installing the .NET Framework.|
|[Install the .NET Framework for developers](../../../docs/framework/install/guide-for-developers.md)|Provides information about installing the .NET Framework.|
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maybe change this to point to the new installation guide (index.md)

|[Install the .NET Framework for developers](../../../docs/framework/install/guide-for-developers.md)|Provides information about installing the .NET Framework.|

## See Also
[.NET Framework 4.6 and 4.5](../../../docs/framework/index.md)
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maybe for another PR but this string (.NET Framework 4.6 and 4.5) should be removed from the docs - I've seen it a few times. We should now call it .NET Framework Guide IMO.

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Opened for work at #2094


> [!NOTE]
> For a general introduction to the .NET Framework for both users and developers, see [Getting Started](../../../docs/framework/get-started/index.md). To download the .NET Framework, see [Installation Guide](../../../docs/framework/install/guide-for-developers.md).
> For a general introduction to the .NET Framework for both users and developers, see [Getting Started](../../../docs/framework/get-started/index.md). To download the .NET Framework, see [Install the .NET Framework for developers](../../../docs/framework/install/guide-for-developers.md).
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same here - change the link to the index file instead of changing the link text

The tables in this topic provide the hardware, operating system, and software requirements for the .NET Framework 4.5 and its point releases (4.5.1 and 4.5.2), the [!INCLUDE[net_v46](../../../includes/net-v46-md.md)] and its point releases (4.6.1 and 4.6.2), and the .NET Framework 4.7. Development environments that enable you to develop applications for the .NET Framework have a separate set of requirements.

For download information and links, see [Installation Guide](../../../docs/framework/install/guide-for-developers.md).
For download information and links, see [Install the .NET Framework for developers](../../../docs/framework/install/guide-for-developers.md).
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again, change link to index.md instead of changing link text. review where you made this change to see whether it makes sense to go to the developer's one or the general one

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These preexisted the PR pointing to guide-for-developers.md, which is why I didn't consider changing them (i.e., I trusted the author of the topic). I'll search and take a closer 👀 look at where the guide for devs is linked.

[EDIT] Took a look. I removed one link to the dev version where the getting started index page is linked. The getting started index page delineates user vs. dev info and links, so that link to the guide for developers wasn't necessary. Otherwise, the other topics look dev-ish in nature.

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mairaw commented May 4, 2017

@richlander @rpetrusha with the release of .NET 4.7, do we need to make updates to the new Windows install pages to include 4.7?
Also, the link used https://go.microsoft.com/fwlink/?linkid=845529&source=dotnetdocs takes you to https://www.microsoft.com/net? Should that instead take you to https://www.microsoft.com/net/download/framework?

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Thanks @guardrex! It will be important to get this one merged. This set is probably due now for another update with the release of .NET Framework 4.7, but let's address that on a separate PR. I've made a few fixes to the TOC structure.

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Update framework/deployment topics for 4.7 issue created.

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mairaw commented May 18, 2017

We only change the ms.date if we made sure that the actual content of the topic is accurate and relevant. I don't think that's the case in this particular PR given that we haven't added 4.7, for example.

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ok ... I'll revert those.

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@guardrex guardrex merged commit fe9ab37 into dotnet:master May 19, 2017
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