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content/en/docs/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/studio-pro-11/extensibility-api/web/web-extensions-howtos/dialog-api.md

@@ -229,30 +229,30 @@ You can also modify the dimensions of a dialog using the dialog API's `update` m
 
 ## Showing a Progress Dialog
 
- To show a progress dialog, you will need to call the method `studioPro.ui.dialogs.showProgressDialog(<title>, <steps>)`, where:
+ To show a progress dialog, call the method `studioPro.ui.dialogs.showProgressDialog(<title>, <steps>)`, where:
 
-* `<title>` is a string which will be displayed in the title bar of the dialog.
-* `<steps>` is an array of `ProgressDialogStep`, which will run in the same order provided in the array. A `ProgressDialogStep` object containing the following properties:
-    * `title` — the title of the step. It is highlighted when the step is running
-    * `description` —  the description of the step. It will show at the bottom of the dialog next to the progress bar
-    * `action` — the action that the step will perform. It returns `Promise<true | string>`. If the step fails, string should be the reason for the failure. Otherwise, `true` will be returned.
+* `<title>` is a string that is displayed in the title bar of the dialog
+* `<steps>` is an array of `ProgressDialogStep`, which runs in the same order provided in the array; a `ProgressDialogStep` object contains the following properties:
+    * `title` – the title of the step, which is highlighted when the step is running
+    * `description` –  the description of the step, which shows at the bottom of the dialog next to the progress bar
+    * `action` – the action the step will perform that returns `Promise<true | string>`, where `string` indicates the reason for failure if the step fails, and `true` is returned otherwise
 
-A checkmark icon will be shown next to the step title after the step has completed successfully. But if one of the steps fails, the dialog will close and the remaining steps will not be executed.
+A checkmark icon will be shown next to the step title once step has completed successfully. If one of the steps fails, the dialog will close and the remaining steps will not be executed.
 
 The `showProgressDialog` method returns a `Promise<ProgressDialogResult>`. `ProgressDialogResult` is an object that contains the following properties:
 
-* `result` - a string that is either `Success`, `Failure` or `UserCancelled`
-    * `Success` is returned when all the steps have returned true
-    * `Failure` is returned when one step has failed, causing the dialog to close
-    * `UserCancelled` is returned when the user closes the dialog themselves and interrupts the process
-* `failedStep` (optional) - it is an object of type `FailedProgressStepResult` which describes the actual step that has failed
+* `result` – a string that is either `Success`, `Failure`, or `UserCancelled`
+    * `Success` – returned when all the steps have returned true
+    * `Failure` – returned when one step has failed, causing the dialog to close
+    * `UserCancelled` – returned when the user closes the dialog themselves and interrupts the process
+* `failedStep` (optional) – an object of type `FailedProgressStepResult` which describes the actual step that has failed
 
 The `FailedProgressStepResult` object contains the following properties:
 
-* `stepTitle` - the title of the step that has failed, causing the whole process to fail
-* `error` - a string which describes the error or exception that has occurred during the step execution
+* `stepTitle` – the title of the step that has failed, causing the whole process to fail
+* `error` – a string which describes the error or exception that has occurred during the step execution
 
-In this example, we will create a menu to show the modal progress dialog, and run three steps. This is done inside the `loaded` event in the main entry point (`src/main/index.ts`).
+In the example below, you create a menu to show the modal progress dialog, and run three steps. This is done inside the `loaded` event in the main entry point (`src/main/index.ts`).
 
 ```typescript
 import { ComponentContext, IComponent, ProgressDialogStep, getStudioProApi } from "@mendix/extensions-api";
@@ -319,7 +319,7 @@ export const component: IComponent = {
 };
 ```
 
-It is recommended to always wrap your step action body in a `try/catch` block so that you can be in control of the error that gets returned to the user:
+It is recommended to always wrap your step action body in a `try/catch` block so you can be in control of the error that is returned to the user:
 
 ```typescript
 const step: ProgressDialogStep = {
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ const step: ProgressDialogStep = {
 ```
 
 When running, the progress dialog will look like this:
-{{< figure src="/attachments/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/extensibility-api/web/dialogs/sample-progress-dialog.png" >}}
+{{< figure src="/attachments/apidocs-mxsdk/apidocs/extensibility-api/web/dialogs/sample-progress-dialog.png" width="300" >}}
 
 ## Extensibility Feedback