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Author: mongoKart

source/whats-new.txt

@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ What's New in 3.1
 The {+driver-short+} v3.1 release includes the following features,
 improvements, and fixes:
 
-- Adds support for more than one KMS (Key Management Service) provider of the same type.
+- Adds support for more than one Key Management Service (KMS) provider of the same type.
   To learn more about KMS providers, see
   :manual:`Queryable Encryption </core/queryable-encryption/>` in the {+server+}
   manual.
@@ -46,7 +46,7 @@ improvements, and fixes:
 - Implements the Happy Eyeballs algorithm for managing
   TCP connections. To learn more about this algorithm, see the Rust documentation
   for the `happy_eyeballs <https://docs.rs/happy_eyeballs/0.2.0/happy_eyeballs/>`__ crate.
-- The driver now publishes a ``TopologyDescriptionChangedEvent`` event when a topology
+- The driver publishes a ``TopologyDescriptionChangedEvent`` event when a topology
   closes.
 
 To learn more about this release, see the `v3.1 Release Notes <{+driver-source+}/releases/tag/v3.1.0>`__