[IMP] CRM: update multiple sales teams doc

[vpk-odoo]

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[meng-odoo]

@StraubCreative Hi Zach! I made tons of changes to VPK's content on this doc, especially since you suggested I edit to make it shorter/clearer/more concise. Please let me know if you have any questions/comments about my changes below :) Thanks

[robodoo]

Sorry, I didn't know about this PR and had to retrieve its information, you may have to re-approve it.

[robodoo]

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[StraubCreative]

Hi @meng-odoo

Good first pass 👍
I made all of the change requests you asked for which you can see in commit 8824706

For next round of review, I highly suggest reworking the tense and tone for the whole document, namely:

• there are a number of instances where verb tense is in continuous present, where I think it would be more ideal to write in the simple present instead (e.g. lines 56 and line 64, clicking vs. click). While continuous present is technically correct, I’d argue that this tense makes for more clunky sentence structures that don’t clearly communicate direct paths of action (guidelines reference on tense)
• there’s a lot of 2nd person familiar pronouns in this doc (e.g. you, your)…can we clean these up a bit so it sounds less accusatory and more instructional? We’ll especially want to remove these in headings per guidelines on headings.

Looking forward to your thoughts and further improvements as you see fit!

[meng-odoo]

@StraubCreative Hi Zac! Thanks for your feedback on my first review--I'll keep all of that in mind when writing my future reviews as well.

I think this one makes a lot of improvements :) Please let me know if you have any more suggestions.

[StraubCreative]

@meng-odoo
Second pass changes were great! Doc sounds a lot more confident, instructional, and easier to read imo.
Please find your change requests on latest commit e8d2765 and let me know if we need anything else, otherwise we can pass over to Doc Review :)

[meng-odoo]

@StraubCreative Thanks Zac! Everything looks good to me. I'll go ahead and tag Doc Review :)

[AntoineVDV]

Perfect! 👌

@robodoo r+

[robodoo]

Because this PR has multiple commits, I need to know how to merge it:

• merge to merge directly, using the PR as merge commit message
• rebase-merge to rebase and merge, using the PR as merge commit message
• rebase-ff to rebase and fast-forward

[AntoineVDV]

@meng-odoo @StraubCreative could you just squash the two commits into one so that the PR can be merged?

[StraubCreative]

@meng-odoo @StraubCreative could you just squash the two commits into one so that the PR can be merged?

Should be good to go @AntoineVDV 🚀

[AntoineVDV]

@robodoo r+