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🤖 Updated build preview is available at: Build log: https://circleci.com/gh/ocpdocs-previewbot/openshift-docs/11416 |
@shaozha @WenXinWei @jinyunma @jianli-wei There is going to be an early drop of the 4.13 release notes soon. Given that I am using one RN to announce support across platforms, wanted to include QE from all of the supported platforms PTAL. FYI: AWS draft doc is currently in review. Once approved, doc for the remaining supported platforms will follow. |
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Beginning with {product-title} 4.12, deploying a three-node cluster is supported on Amazon Web Services(AWs), Google Cloud Platform (GCP), Microsoft Azure, and VMware vSphere. This type of {product-title} cluster is a smaller, more resource efficient cluster, as it consists of zero compute machines and three control plane machines only. |
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How about replacing as it consists of zero compute machines and three control plane machines only
with as it only consists of three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines
? Because it's not really zero compute machines, but the 3 machines acting as both compute and control plane machines. Thanks!
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+1, actually, three nodes have both "master" and "worker" roles.
NAME STATUS ROLES AGE VERSION INTERNAL-IP EXTERNAL-IP OS-IMAGE KERNEL-VERSION CONTAINER-RUNTIME
ci-op-rbqqvr7j-77520-5flbs-master-0.c.XXXXXXXXXXXX.internal Ready control-plane,master,worker 6h7m v1.26.0+b923723 10.0.0.5 <none> Red Hat Enterprise Linux CoreOS 413.86.202302201445-0 (Ootpa) 4.18.0-372.43.1.el8_6.x86_64 cri-o://1.26.1-6.rhaos4.13.git159cc9c.el8
ci-op-rbqqvr7j-77520-5flbs-master-1.c.XXXXXXXXXXXX.internal Ready control-plane,master,worker 6h7m v1.26.0+b923723 10.0.0.4 <none> Red Hat Enterprise Linux CoreOS 413.86.202302201445-0 (Ootpa) 4.18.0-372.43.1.el8_6.x86_64 cri-o://1.26.1-6.rhaos4.13.git159cc9c.el8
ci-op-rbqqvr7j-77520-5flbs-master-2.c.XXXXXXXXXXXX.internal Ready control-plane,master,worker 6h6m v1.26.0+b923723 10.0.0.3 <none> Red Hat Enterprise Linux CoreOS 413.86.202302201445-0 (Ootpa) 4.18.0-372.43.1.el8_6.x86_64 cri-o://1.26.1-6.rhaos4.13.git159cc9c.el8
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How about replacing
as it consists of zero compute machines and three control plane machines only
withas it only consists of three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines
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@jianli-wei @jinyunma Excellent point. Updated accordingly. Thank you.
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@shaozha @WenXinWei @jinyunma @jianli-wei Thanks to everyone for their input on the three-node cluster docs. Please take a moment to review the release note. An early copy of the RN is going to stakeholders on March 14th. If possible, I would like to have this in that version. |
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I spotted a couple of tiny things, but otherwise, LGTM!
[id="ocp-4-13-installation-and-upgrade-three-node"] | ||
==== Three-node cluster support | ||
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Beginning with {product-title} {product-version}, deploying a three-node cluster is supported on Amazon Web Services(AWs), Microsoft Azure, Google Cloud Platform (GCP), and VMware vSphere. This type of {product-title} cluster is a smaller, more resource efficient cluster, as it only consists of three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines. |
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Beginning with {product-title} {product-version}, deploying a three-node cluster is supported on Amazon Web Services(AWs), Microsoft Azure, Google Cloud Platform (GCP), and VMware vSphere. This type of {product-title} cluster is a smaller, more resource efficient cluster, as it only consists of three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines. | |
Beginning with {product-title} {product-version}, deploying a three-node cluster is supported on Amazon Web Services (AWS), Microsoft Azure, Google Cloud Platform (GCP), and VMware vSphere. This type of {product-title} cluster is a smaller, more resource efficient cluster, as it consists of only three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines. |
- In the preview, {product-version} renders as "Branch Build". I assume that variable will be updated by the time this goes live?
- Per IBM Style, place "only" as close to the word it modifies as possible. (https://www.ibm.com/docs/en/ibm-style?topic=grammar-adverbs-only)
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That's right @lahinson. The variable is replaced with 4.13
when it goes live. Thanks for the review.
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Version(s):
4.13
Issue:
This PR address osdocs-5227. This Jira issue represents the collective docs work for three-node support on AWS, Azure, GCP, and vSphere.
Link to docs preview:
Three-node cluster support
QE review: