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This PR address osdocs-5227. This Jira issue represents the collective docs work for three-node support on AWS, Azure, GCP, and vSphere.

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Three-node cluster support

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@shaozha @WenXinWei @jinyunma @jianli-wei There is going to be an early drop of the 4.13 release notes soon. Given that I am using one RN to announce support across platforms, wanted to include QE from all of the supported platforms PTAL.

FYI: AWS draft doc is currently in review. Once approved, doc for the remaining supported platforms will follow.

[id="ocp-4-13-installation-and-upgrade-three-node"]
==== Three-node cluster support

Beginning with {product-title} 4.12, deploying a three-node cluster is supported on Amazon Web Services(AWs), Google Cloud Platform (GCP), Microsoft Azure, and VMware vSphere. This type of {product-title} cluster is a smaller, more resource efficient cluster, as it consists of zero compute machines and three control plane machines only.

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How about replacing as it consists of zero compute machines and three control plane machines only with as it only consists of three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines? Because it's not really zero compute machines, but the 3 machines acting as both compute and control plane machines. Thanks!

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+1, actually, three nodes have both "master" and "worker" roles.

NAME                                                          STATUS   ROLES                               AGE    VERSION           INTERNAL-IP   EXTERNAL-IP   OS-IMAGE                                                        KERNEL-VERSION                 CONTAINER-RUNTIME
ci-op-rbqqvr7j-77520-5flbs-master-0.c.XXXXXXXXXXXX.internal   Ready    control-plane,master,worker   6h7m   v1.26.0+b923723   10.0.0.5      <none>        Red Hat Enterprise Linux CoreOS 413.86.202302201445-0 (Ootpa)   4.18.0-372.43.1.el8_6.x86_64   cri-o://1.26.1-6.rhaos4.13.git159cc9c.el8
ci-op-rbqqvr7j-77520-5flbs-master-1.c.XXXXXXXXXXXX.internal   Ready    control-plane,master,worker   6h7m   v1.26.0+b923723   10.0.0.4      <none>        Red Hat Enterprise Linux CoreOS 413.86.202302201445-0 (Ootpa)   4.18.0-372.43.1.el8_6.x86_64   cri-o://1.26.1-6.rhaos4.13.git159cc9c.el8
ci-op-rbqqvr7j-77520-5flbs-master-2.c.XXXXXXXXXXXX.internal   Ready    control-plane,master,worker   6h6m   v1.26.0+b923723   10.0.0.3      <none>        Red Hat Enterprise Linux CoreOS 413.86.202302201445-0 (Ootpa)   4.18.0-372.43.1.el8_6.x86_64   cri-o://1.26.1-6.rhaos4.13.git159cc9c.el8

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How about replacing as it consists of zero compute machines and three control plane machines only with as it only consists of three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines?

@jianli-wei @jinyunma Excellent point. Updated accordingly. Thank you.

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mjpytlak commented Mar 10, 2023

@shaozha @WenXinWei @jinyunma @jianli-wei Thanks to everyone for their input on the three-node cluster docs. Please take a moment to review the release note. An early copy of the RN is going to stakeholders on March 14th. If possible, I would like to have this in that version.

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/lgtm

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/lgtm

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/lgtm

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/remove-label peer-review-needed
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I spotted a couple of tiny things, but otherwise, LGTM!

[id="ocp-4-13-installation-and-upgrade-three-node"]
==== Three-node cluster support

Beginning with {product-title} {product-version}, deploying a three-node cluster is supported on Amazon Web Services(AWs), Microsoft Azure, Google Cloud Platform (GCP), and VMware vSphere. This type of {product-title} cluster is a smaller, more resource efficient cluster, as it only consists of three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines.
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Beginning with {product-title} {product-version}, deploying a three-node cluster is supported on Amazon Web Services(AWs), Microsoft Azure, Google Cloud Platform (GCP), and VMware vSphere. This type of {product-title} cluster is a smaller, more resource efficient cluster, as it only consists of three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines.
Beginning with {product-title} {product-version}, deploying a three-node cluster is supported on Amazon Web Services (AWS), Microsoft Azure, Google Cloud Platform (GCP), and VMware vSphere. This type of {product-title} cluster is a smaller, more resource efficient cluster, as it consists of only three control plane machines, which also act as compute machines.

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That's right @lahinson. The variable is replaced with 4.13 when it goes live. Thanks for the review.

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@mjpytlak mjpytlak force-pushed the osdocs-5227-rn branch 2 times, most recently from a189298 to d671176 Compare March 17, 2023 18:13
@mjpytlak mjpytlak merged commit e219a30 into openshift:enterprise-4.13 Mar 17, 2023
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