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OSSM-6063 [DOC] OpenShift Service Mesh Console (OSSMC) plugin Integration #88446
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🤖 Tue Feb 25 11:39:44 - Prow CI generated the docs preview: |
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Looks good, I had one trivial and optional suggestion. But not blocking approval.
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LGTM
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@shreyasiddhartha I suggests a more descriptive compatibility table to indicate version alignment betwen Kiali/OSSMC and OSSM and the OCP versions supported.
The table is in markdown format, sorry. I hope it is not difficult to convert it to adoc.
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Global comment: "OpenShift" is not really an approved short name. Instances of {ocp-short-name}
in this PR should probably all be {ocp-product-title}
. I corrected a few but will stop because it will be a lot of comments - please replace them throughout.
Overall this is pretty solid - there are some similar formatting issues across a big PR, so it' a decent amount of comments, but in pretty good shape regardless 🙂
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@shreyasiddhartha I have added some comments about installation section and compatibility matrix
@ferhoyos Can you please give your lgtm again? |
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LGTM
/remove-label peer-review-done |
/label peer-review-needed |
I have added the peer review label again as there were multiple changes after the previous peer review. |
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Glad to re-review - this looks great overall! There are still some issues with unapproved product name use.
"OpenShift" by itself is not an approved name for OpenShift Container Platform. I am not sure the history behind the {ocp-short-name}
attribute, but we are not supposed to use "OpenShift" as a short form.
I have replaced {ocp-short-name}
with suggestions of {ocp-product-title}
where I see it in this PR, but honestly most of them can probably just be removed. Saying "the web console" is typically sufficient without specifying the product (in most contexts).
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{SMPluginShort} is only supported on {ocp-short-name} 4.15 and above. For {ocp-short-name} 4.14 users, only the standalone Kiali console is accessible. | ||
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You can install the {SMPluginShort} by using the {ocp-product-title} web console or the {oc-first}. |
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Ah - apparently the oc-first
attribute isn't in the service mesh attributes file. If you want to add it to your file for use, the format is a little weird:
:oc-first: pass:quotes[OpenShift CLI (`oc`)]
Otherwise, you can just type out the thing when you need it (I find that annoying to type, hence created the attribute 😉)
You can install the {SMPluginShort} by using the {ocp-product-title} web console or the {oc-first}. | |
You can install the {SMPluginShort} by using the {ocp-product-title} web console or the OpenShift CLI (`oc`). |
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Thanks @jeana-redhat! I removed the attribute because it wasn't displaying correctly. I will try adding the attribute and see what happens again. 😄
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it's working, yay 🎉
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LGTM, nice work!
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@jeana-redhat: new pull request created: #89162 In response to this:
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Change type: Doc update; OpenShift Service Mesh Console (OSSMC) plugin Integration
Doc JIRA: https://issues.redhat.com/browse/OSSM-6063
Fix Version: service-mesh-docs-main and service-mesh-docs-3.0
Doc Preview: https://88446--ocpdocs-pr.netlify.app/openshift-service-mesh/latest/observability/kiali/ossm-console-plugin
SME Review/QE Review: @jshaughn @ferhoyos
Peer Review: @jeana-redhat