Small correction in chap. 10 section "Transfer protocols"

[fabienhinault]

In subsection "The Smart Protocol / Downloading Data / SSH", it is writen:
"If you're doing the fetch over SSH, fetch-pack instead runs something like this:"
I think the "instead" was there when some sentences were written above in version 1, but should disappear now.

[ben]

Actually, looking at it, it seems like I meant to write it that way, but I can see how it might not flow well for a non-native English reader. Which of these seems best to you?

• If you're doing the fetch over SSH, fetch-pack will instead run something like this:
• If you're doing the fetch over SSH, fetch-pack runs something like this instead:
• If you're doing the fetch over SSH, fetch-pack runs something like this:

[daftano]

To me the best seems to be the third.
The first could be. Would definitely avoid the second.

My two cents.

[ben]

Done!

[fabienhinault]

Perfect! Sorry to be so unreactive.