Addressed review comments

Author: Bobbins228

demo-notebooks/additional-demos/hf_interactive.ipynb

@@ -92,7 +92,7 @@
    ],
    "source": [
     "# Create our cluster and submit\n",
-    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\"\n",
+    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\" unless you specify the local queue manually below\n",
     "cluster = Cluster(ClusterConfiguration(name='hfgputest', \n",
     "                                       namespace=\"default\",\n",
     "                                       num_workers=1,\n",

demo-notebooks/additional-demos/local_interactive.ipynb

@@ -48,7 +48,8 @@
    },
    "outputs": [],
    "source": [
-    "# Create our cluster and submit appwrapper\n",
+    "# Create and submit our cluster\n",
+    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\" unless you specify the local queue manually below\n",
     "namespace = \"default\" # Update to your namespace\n",
     "cluster_name = \"hfgputest-1\"\n",
     "\n",

demo-notebooks/additional-demos/ray_job_client.ipynb

@@ -26,7 +26,6 @@
     "# Create authentication object for user permissions\n",
     "# IF unused, SDK will automatically check for default kubeconfig, then in-cluster config\n",
     "# KubeConfigFileAuthentication can also be used to specify kubeconfig path manually\n",
-    "\n",
     "auth_token = \"XXXXX\" # The auth_token is used later for the RayJobClient\n",
     "auth = TokenAuthentication(\n",
     "    token = auth_token,\n",
@@ -43,6 +42,7 @@
    "outputs": [],
    "source": [
     "# Create and configure our cluster object\n",
+    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\" unless you specify the local queue manually below\n",
     "cluster = Cluster(ClusterConfiguration(\n",
     "    name='jobtest',\n",
     "    namespace='default', # Update to your namespace\n",

demo-notebooks/guided-demos/0_basic_ray.ipynb

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
    "id": "8d4a42f6",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "In this first notebook, we will go through the basics of using the SDK to:\n",
+    "In first notebook, we will go through the basics of using the SDK to:\n",
     " - Spin up a Ray cluster with our desired resources\n",
     " - View the status and specs of our Ray cluster\n",
     " - Take down the Ray cluster when finished"
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@
    "outputs": [],
    "source": [
     "# Create and configure our cluster object\n",
-    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\"\n",
+    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\" unless you specify the local queue manually below\n",
     "cluster = Cluster(ClusterConfiguration(\n",
     "    name='raytest',\n",
     "    namespace='default', # Update to your namespace\n",

demo-notebooks/guided-demos/1_basic_instascale.ipynb

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
    "id": "9865ee8c",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "In this second notebook, we will go over the basics of using InstaScale to scale up/down necessary resources that are not currently available on your OpenShift Cluster (in cloud environments).\n",
+    "In this notebook, we will go over the basics of using InstaScale to scale up/down necessary resources that are not currently available on your OpenShift Cluster (in cloud environments).\n",
     "\n",
     "NOTE: The InstaScale and MCAD components are in Tech Preview"
    ]

demo-notebooks/guided-demos/2_cluster_job_client.ipynb

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "In this third demo we will go over the basics of the Ray Job Submission Client in the SDK"
+    "In this demo we will go over the basics of the Ray Job Submission Client in the SDK"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -26,7 +26,6 @@
     "# Create authentication object for user permissions\n",
     "# IF unused, SDK will automatically check for default kubeconfig, then in-cluster config\n",
     "# KubeConfigFileAuthentication can also be used to specify kubeconfig path manually\n",
-    "\n",
     "auth = TokenAuthentication(\n",
     "    token = \"XXXXX\",\n",
     "    server = \"XXXXX\",\n",
@@ -42,6 +41,7 @@
    "outputs": [],
    "source": [
     "# Create and configure our cluster object\n",
+    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\" unless you specify the local queue manually below\n",
     "cluster = Cluster(ClusterConfiguration(\n",
     "    name='jobtest',\n",
     "    namespace='default', # Update to your namespace\n",

demo-notebooks/guided-demos/3_basic_interactive.ipynb

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
    "id": "bbc21043",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "In this fourth notebook, we will go over how to leverage the SDK to directly work interactively with a Ray Cluster during development."
+    "In this notebook, we will go over how to leverage the SDK to directly work interactively with a Ray Cluster during development."
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@
    "outputs": [],
    "source": [
     "# Create and configure our cluster object\n",
-    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\"\n",
+    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\" unless you specify the local queue manually below\n",
     "namespace = \"default\" # Update to your namespace\n",
     "cluster_name = \"interactivetest\"\n",
     "cluster = Cluster(ClusterConfiguration(\n",
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@
    "outputs": [],
    "source": [
     "from codeflare_sdk import generate_cert\n",
-    "# Export the environment variables to enable TLS\n",
+    "# Create required TLS cert and export the environment variables to enable TLS\n",
     "generate_cert.generate_tls_cert(cluster_name, namespace)\n",
     "generate_cert.export_env(cluster_name, namespace)"
    ]

demo-notebooks/guided-demos/notebook-ex-outputs/0_basic_ray.ipynb

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
    "id": "8d4a42f6",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "In this first notebook, we will go through the basics of using the SDK to:\n",
+    "In this notebook, we will go through the basics of using the SDK to:\n",
     " - Spin up a Ray cluster with our desired resources\n",
     " - View the status and specs of our Ray cluster\n",
     " - Take down the Ray cluster when finished"
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@
    ],
    "source": [
     "# Create and configure our cluster object\n",
-    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\"\n",
+    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\" unless you specify the local queue manually below\n",
     "cluster = Cluster(ClusterConfiguration(\n",
     "    name='raytest',\n",
     "    namespace='default', # Update to your namespace\n",

demo-notebooks/guided-demos/notebook-ex-outputs/1_basic_instascale.ipynb

@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
    "id": "9865ee8c",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "In this second notebook, we will go over the basics of using InstaScale to scale up/down necessary resources that are not currently available on your OpenShift Cluster (in cloud environments).\n",
+    "In this notebook, we will go over the basics of using InstaScale to scale up/down necessary resources that are not currently available on your OpenShift Cluster (in cloud environments).\n",
     "\n",
     "NOTE: The InstaScale and MCAD components are in Tech Preview"
    ]

demo-notebooks/guided-demos/notebook-ex-outputs/2_cluster_job_client.ipynb

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
    "cell_type": "markdown",
    "metadata": {},
    "source": [
-    "In this third demo we will go over the basics of the Ray Job Submission Client in the SDK"
+    "In this demo we will go over the basics of the Ray Job Submission Client in the SDK"
    ]
   },
   {
@@ -26,7 +26,6 @@
     "# Create authentication object for user permissions\n",
     "# IF unused, SDK will automatically check for default kubeconfig, then in-cluster config\n",
     "# KubeConfigFileAuthentication can also be used to specify kubeconfig path manually\n",
-    "\n",
     "auth = TokenAuthentication(\n",
     "    token = \"XXXXX\",\n",
     "    server = \"XXXXX\",\n",
@@ -42,6 +41,7 @@
    "outputs": [],
    "source": [
     "# Create and configure our cluster object\n",
+    "# The SDK will try to find the name of your default local queue based on the annotation \"kueue.x-k8s.io/default-queue\": \"true\" unless you specify the local queue manually below\n",
     "cluster = Cluster(ClusterConfiguration(\n",
     "    name='jobtest',\n",
     "    namespace='default', # Update to your namespace\n",