content-sync - KNW-2027 translation finished, pick-25

Author: thomaskoslowski

src/onprem/de/intro_setup.asciidoc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 // -*- coding: utf-8 -*-
-// IGNORE % Willkommens
+// IGNORE % Willkommensseite
 // NONASCII 
 include::global_attr.adoc[]
 = {CMK} aufsetzen
@@ -42,7 +42,8 @@ Im {CE-saas} Handbuch finden Sie eine https://docs.checkmk.com/saas/de/cce.html[
 
 Eine Aufstellung der Unterschiede zwischen den Editionen finden Sie auf unserer link:https://checkmk.com/de/preise[Website^].
 
-Für diesen Leitfaden für Einsteiger nutzen wir {RE} -- weisen Sie aber auf wichtige Unterschiede zu den kommerziellen Editionen hin.
+Für diesen Leitfaden für Einsteiger nutzen wir {RE}.
+Wir weisen Sie aber auf wichtige Unterschiede zu den kommerziellen Editionen hin.
 
 {cee-only}
 Wann immer wir in diesem Handbuch Funktionen besprechen, die nur für die kommerziellen Editionen gelten -- also für {SE} oder {CE} -- , kennzeichnen wir dies mit dem Symbol wie in diesem Absatz.
@@ -350,7 +351,7 @@ image::intro_omd_site_not_found.png[alt="Fehlermeldung im Webbrowser zu einer ni
 Melden Sie sich nun mit dem Benutzernamen `cmkadmin` und dem von Ihnen gewählten Passwort an. 
 Dadurch landen Sie auf der Startseite von {CMK}, auf die wir im nächsten Kapitel näher eingehen werden:
 
-.Die Startseite von {CMK} ist standardmäßig die Willkommens-Seite
-image::intro_welcome.png[alt="Die Willkommens-Seite als Startseite.",fullscreen=1]
+.Die Startseite von {CMK} ist standardmäßig die Willkommensseite
+image::intro_welcome.png[alt="Die Willkommensseite als Startseite.",fullscreen=1]
 
-xref:intro_welcome#[Weiter geht es mit der Willkommens-Seite]
+xref:intro_welcome#[Weiter geht es mit der Willkommensseite]

src/onprem/en/intro_setup.asciidoc

@@ -23,50 +23,25 @@ You can use it to comprehensively monitor small IT infrastructures.
 Support is available in our link:https://forum.checkmk.com[Forum^].
 
 xref:cse#[{CSE}] is primarily aimed at professional users and offers a number of interesting features beyond the scope of {RE},
-such as with the xref:cmc#[{CMK} Micro Core (CMC)] a very performant own core (which replaces Nagios), 
+such as with the xref:cmc#[{CMK} Micro Core (CMC)], the very performant core developed in-house by Checkmk (which replaces Nagios), 
 a flexible distribution of {CMK} xref:glossar#agent[monitoring agents] (which obtain the information from the monitored target systems),
 a large number of sophisticated widgets to incorporate into xref:glossar#dashboard[dashboards], xref:reporting#[reporting], and much more.
 As a {SE} user, you will receive professional support link:https://checkmk.com/product/support[from our team^] or from one of our link:https://checkmk.com/partners/find-partner[partners^].
 
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-xref:cce#[{CCE}] extends the functionality of {SE}, among others, with features that are useful in cloud environments such as Amazon Web Services (AWS) and Microsoft Azure,
-with specialized check plug-ins and dashboards, as well as providing a combination of auto-registration and configuration of the {CMK} agent in the xref:glossar#push_mode[push mode].
-More details can be found in the article on xref:cce#[{CE-onprem}].
-{CME} is the multi-tenant capable extension of {CE} and has all of the necessary functions to operate isolated sites for each of multiple customers with {CMK} via a xref:glossar#distributed_monitoring[distributed monitoring]. 
-If you as a _managed service provider (MSP)_ want to offer these services to your customers, this is your edition.
-You can find more details on the concept of managed services in the introduction xref:managed#intro[of this article].
+xref:cce#[{CCE}] extends the functionality of {SE} with features for the comprehensive monitoring of hybrid environments in which hosts are located both in data centers and in cloud environments such as Amazon Web Services (AWS) and Microsoft Azure.
+Examples of these features include cloud-specific check plug-ins and dashboards, the {CMK} agent in xref:glossar#push_mode[push mode], automatic host registration, and application observability via the OpenTelemetry standard.
+xref:managed#[{ME}] is the multi-tenant extension of {CE} and has all of the features needed to operate {CMK} sites for multiple customers that are isolated from each other via xref:glossar#distributed_monitoring[distributed monitoring].
 
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-In addition to the _on-premises_ editions mentioned above, you can use {CCE-saas} as _Software as a Service (SaaS)_ in the cloud.
-The link:https://docs.checkmk.com/saas/en/intro_setup.html[Beginner's Guide] in the Checkmk Cloud User Guide will help you get started with {CE-saas}.
+In addition to the aforementioned on-premises editions, you can also use {CMK} with {CCE-saas} as software as a service (SaaS) in the cloud.
+In the {CE-saas} User Guide, you will find an  https://docs.checkmk.com/saas/en/cce.html[overview of the functions] and a link:https://docs.checkmk.com/saas/en/intro_setup.html[Beginner's Guide^], which will help you get started with {CE-saas}.
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-xref:cce#[{CCE}] erweitert den Funktionsumfang von {SE} um Funktionen zur vollständigen Überwachung hybrider Umgebungen, in denen Hosts sowohl in Rechenzentren als auch in Cloud-Umgebungen wie Amazon Web Services (AWS) und Microsoft Azure beheimatet sind.
-Beispiele dieser Features sind Cloud-spezifische Check-Plugins und Dashboards, der {CMK}-Agent im xref:glossar#push_mode[Push-Modus], die Autoregistrierung von Hosts und _Observability_ von Anwendungen über den OpenTelemetry-Standard.
-xref:managed#[{ME}] ist die mandantenfähige Erweiterung von {CE} und verfügt über alle Funktionen, um mit {CMK} über das xref:glossar#distributed_monitoring[verteilte Monitoring] voneinander abgeschottete Instanzen für mehrere Kunden zu betreiben.
-
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-{CMK} können Sie außer in den genannten _On-Premises_-Editionen auch mit {CCE-saas} als _Software as a Service (SaaS)_ in der Cloud nutzen.
-Im {CE-saas} Handbuch finden Sie eine https://docs.checkmk.com/saas/de/cce.html[Übersicht der Funktionen] und einen link:https://docs.checkmk.com/saas/de/intro_setup.html[Leitfaden für Einsteiger^], der Ihnen bei den ersten Schritten mit {CE-saas} hilft.
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 A list with descriptions of the differences between the various editions can be found on our link:https://checkmk.com/pricing[website^].
 
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-Für diesen Leitfaden für Einsteiger nutzen wir {RE} -- weisen Sie aber auf wichtige Unterschiede zu den kommerziellen Editionen hin.
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+For this Beginner's Guide, we are using {RE}.
+However, we point out important differences compared to the commercial editions.
 
 {cee-only}
 In this User Guide, whenever we discuss functions that apply only to the commercial editions -- i.e. to {SE} or {CE} -- we mark this with the icon as in this paragraph.
@@ -326,12 +301,7 @@ Overall state:      [green]#running#
 {cee-only}
 Since the commercial editions have more features than {RE}, you will see more services there. 
 In addition, you will find `cmc` as the core instead of `nagios`.
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-Welche Dienste es in {RE} und in den kommerziellen Editionen gibt und wofür die einzelnen Dienste zuständig sind, können Sie im Artikel über die xref:cmk_processes#[Instanzdienste] nachlesen.
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+In the article about xref:cmk_processes#[site services], you can read about the services available in {RE} and in the commercial editions, and what each service is responsible for.
 
 The `omd` command provides many more options for controlling and configuring sites, and these are described in the article on xref:omd_basics#[administering sites].
 In addition, you can find out how the directory structure for {CMK} is set up in the article on xref:cmk_commandline#folder_structure[{CMK} on the command line].
@@ -346,7 +316,7 @@ This URL consists of the name or IP address of the {CMK} server, a slash, and th
 
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-As soon as you are running {CMK} as production system, we strongly recommend for security reasons that you only allow access to the interface in a secured manner, i.e., via HTTPS instead of HTTP.
+As soon as you are running {CMK} as a production system, we strongly recommend for security reasons that you only allow access to the interface in a secured manner, i.e., via HTTPS instead of HTTP.
 You can find out what you need to do for this in the article on xref:omd_https#[securing the web interface with HTTPS].
 ====
 
@@ -374,7 +344,7 @@ image::intro_omd_site_not_found.png[alt="Error message in the web browser about
 Now log in with the username `cmkadmin` and the password you chose at the beginning. 
 This will take you to the start page in {CMK}, which we will look at in more detail in the next chapter:
 
-.The default {CMK} start page is the welcome page
+.The welcome page is the default start page in {CMK}
 image::intro_welcome.png[alt="The welcome page as the start page.",fullscreen=1]
 
 xref:intro_welcome#[Continue with the welcome page]